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Vol. 1
In the two ci poems titled "He Sheng Chao" addressed to Official Wang, Ma Danyang (a Taoist priest from Kunyu Mountain) depicts the spiritual realm of a Daoist practitioner. Those who cultivate the Dao often behold auspicious clouds and radiant qi, their hearts returning to pristine simplicity. While worldly people busy themselves with purposeful actions, the cultivator dwells in wuwei (non-action), free from thought and deliberation. During internal practice, they unite the chanu (yin principle) of the Crimson Palace (heart) with the infant (yang principle), observing with wisdom's eye the movements of sun and moon (symbolized by the crow and hare), circulating the converging energies of the Li (Fire) and Kan (Water) trigrams—how few can comprehend these profound alchemical principles? Clad in paper robes and hempen cloth, preserving the primordial purity of heaven and earth's dawn, playing the qin zither beneath wind and moon with a heart utterly detached from worldly dust. Frequently accompanying fellow adepts among clouds and mist, observing the flight of birds and running of hares (symbolizing celestial motions), refining the purple-gold elixir (neidan, internal alchemy) within the jade furnace (dantian, energy center)—these mysteries, how many truly understand?
The three "Bu Suan Zi" poems convey insights from monastic cultivation. Quan Dao of Fufeng (styled Master Carefree), upon seeing a painting of skeletons, experienced sudden awakening, gathered his scattered mind and stilled thoughts. At forty-six with hair already whitened, he shook his sleeves and wandered like drifting clouds. Human life resembles an impermanent deadline—all must eventually reach their end. Those soulless beings chasing fame and fortune are fated to become skeletons, unable to escape. He exhorts people to sever worldly attachments, leap from the red dust's fiery furnace, and return to original purity. Shan Tong (Ma Danyang's self-reference) abandoned secular life to enter the mysterious gate, vowing to become one who roams in perfect freedom—he'd rather die in western Qin than return east to his homeland, refusing to let even his bones be buried by descendants near the sea.
Recalling how Patriarch Chongyang (Wang Chongyang) tirelessly awakened him while he still clung to desires, one night he dreamed of standing in the courtyard sighing: "My life is like fine porcelain—shattered if dropped." Before the words faded, a bowl fell from the sky, startling him awake in tears. Next morning his master said: "Last night's terror marked your true awakening." Just as Lü Dongbin renounced worldly glory after awakening from the Yellow Millet dream, Shan Tong too awoke abruptly from the porcelain bowl dream, severed earthly ties to refine lead and mercury (neidan alchemical symbols), ultimately attaining perfection of heart and nature.
Finally, he sternly warns against cultivation taboos: seeking empty fame before attaining true realization most damages one's foundation. Having lost one's original heart, whom can you blame? Seeming foolishness may surpass cleverness—better be simple and guileless, practicing wuwei and non-striving. Why bother composing idle verses? He vows lifelong barefoot austerity, neither drinking cool water in summer's heat nor warming by fires in winter's chill, thus tempering his resolve.
Several ci poems from the Gradual Awakening Collection reveal the Daoist practitioner's transcendence of worldly attachments in pursuit of the true Dao. The first depicts an ascetic cultivating in humble surroundings: "Now I vow to practice within earthen walls—rejecting cool springs in summer, shunning warm stoves in winter—wholly focused on harmonizing Yin-Yang and the water-fire balance in my alchemical furnace. To repay my master's kindness, I diligently refine lead and mercury (neidan techniques), awaiting the day of perfected merit when I'll become a barefoot immortal roaming Penglai's isles."
Spring Exploration for fellow cultivator Wang Zhixuan: "Pure rain falls in this cave heaven blessed land, where jade forests of the immortal realm shimmer afar. Grasping my jade staff in practice, I witness golden lotuses (neidan symbols) blooming from innate nature. When the infant (original spirit) and crimson maiden (essential jing) unite, when true dragon and tiger (water-fire energies) couple, radiant auspicious light emerges spontaneously. Let this luminous true nature take command—cherish these precious hours of cultivation."
To fellow practitioner Li Guanren: "Both born in the Guimao year, fifty-two springs have slipped by unnoticed. I entered the Dao path first to explore its mysteries, yet dare not forget to guide you. Day and night, attend your practice diligently—mere verses are empty artifice. Cast off worldly fetters swiftly, lest missteps plunge you to the Yellow Springs."
For desire-free adept Lu Shouci, depicting neidan states: "Serene clouds circulate through nine orifices (body's energy gates); wuwei refinement forges the golden elixir. Like the black dragon's pearl emerging—countless auroral beams envelop the void, illuminating the pledged path to Penglai."
Willow Branches for Zhao Daoji: "The golden rooster (yang energy) crows in sunlight, startling dreams apart. As dawn breezes stir and wine-fog clears—sky and waters purify, the empty chamber brightens, all dust-thoughts vanish in tranquil mind-nature."
To four fellow adepts: "For whom is this Willow Branches verse? For immortal friends Yu, Hao, and Liu. With Qiu Chuji, Liu Chuxuan, Tan Chuduan, and Ma Yu, we'll decipher the mysteries—complete the nine restorations and seven reversals (neidan cycles), ultimately achieving the Dao to face the primordial."
The final Pride of Fishermen is self-admonishment: "Dreaming, my fair wife becomes my mother; beloved concubines transform into daughters. Deluded in past lives, we've changed forms to bind as spouses. Ma Yu (Shantong) henceforth stays ever vigilant—thanks to Sun Bu'er (Fengxian)'s awakening, I vow to cultivate pristine true nature."
Through vivid metaphors, these poems chronicle Quanzhen practitioners severing familial bonds, renouncing worldly splendor, and advancing in neidan cultivation—a testament to the path of awakening.
The Gradual Awakening Collection contains these verses of Daoist cultivation, serving as admonitions to guide people toward spiritual practice. The first passage speaks of time's swift passage—a human life spans merely twenty-five thousand days, as fleeting as the sun setting behind western hills. Without cultivation, one merely squanders this precious time. Those who truly awaken to the Dao (the Way) do not muddle through life in confusion, but diligently refine themselves in blessed grotto-heavens (Daoist celestial realms), striving like the golden toad of the moon palace lifting the crimson sun.
The poem dedicated to Sister Sun (a female practitioner) advises: Constantly sweep away distracting thoughts from the heart's field, sever the Three Corpses (three malevolent spirits believed to reside in the human body according to Daoism) and Six Drains (six desire-driven forces that deplete vital energy). Maintaining this purity allows comprehension of profound mysteries. There's no need to obsess over the nominal trappings of alchemical furnaces—when Yin and Yang (represented by lead and mercury) harmonize naturally, the Golden Elixir (supreme treasure) will form, ultimately culminating in ascension to Penglai's immortal isles amid radiant clouds.
The admonition to fellow disciples states: Abstaining from meat and wine or renouncing wealth and lust may seem simple, yet the true challenge lies in extinguishing blind anger. Carnal desires prove hardest to relinquish—one must resolutely sever them, treating temptations as mortal enemies or living ghosts to be avoided even in dreams.
Another passage counsels mindful intention during kitchen work: Boiling water and preparing meals should avoid scalding insects; firewood, rice, oil, and salt should neither be wasted nor hoarded. Maintaining inner and outer purity while forgetting worldly concerns ensures future residence in immortal grottoes.
The ox-cart allegory for spiritual practice is particularly vivid: When a cart stuck in mire prompts the driver's relentless whipping, the ox suddenly speaks: "You make me suffer to feed your family, so I pity you enough to speak truth. If you fail to awaken in this life, in the next you'll become what I am now." This employs rebirth concepts to warn worldly beings.
Finally, the lyric Willow Tips Green declares: Upon realizing the truth of non-arising and non-ceasing, even attachments like plucking flowers or leaves are abandoned. In joy, one sings loudly amid fragrant grasses and drunkenly dreams of roaming immortal realms. Sometimes with earnest words it admonishes people: Don't waste your life as walking corpses enslaved by greed and lust. The acrostic verse further reveals: Transcend the cycle of rebirth like lotuses in flames, refining golden blossoms and numinous herbs (alternative names for the Golden Elixir) to complete innate deficiencies. Ma Yu (founder of the Quanzhen [Complete Perfection] tradition) was originally an ignorant man who awakened to worldly ties' emptiness through bitter realization, resolutely taking monastic vows.
These poems from the Gradual Awakening Collection all depict the spiritual states and cultivation life of Daoist practitioners. The first poem, "Joy of Welcoming Spring," dedicated to "Master Ru," describes how adepts experience seasonal changes within their own bodies, needing neither the ancient pitch pipes for measuring solar terms nor the ceremonial clay oxen beaten during Spring Begins. The cultivation in their immortal fields (metaphor for the Dantian) relies on plowing through clouds, utterly free from farmers guiding plows. After attaining the skill of nourishing life and spreading De (Virtue), the yellow sprouts (nascent vital Qi) within grow more luxuriant than flowers and willows, while the jade cavern (Dantian) naturally gestates an immortal embryo, allowing one to freely drink the wine of longevity.
The poem for Master Liu describes how the Big Dipper's handle turns toward the eastern Zhen position (spring equinox), causing yang energy to rise spontaneously. The bluebird (messenger of the Queen Mother of the West) delivers celestial news, and the clay ox knows the season has arrived. When the sun reaches the western land (autumn), golden light shimmers, nourishing yellow sprouts, auspicious herbs, and lingzhi mushrooms. Reveling in the nine-times refined golden elixir (Jindan), all gather joyfully at the jade banquet.
"Spring in Jade Tower," dedicated to Jiang Daoquan, portrays a Daoist drinking immortal wine, reclining to watch clouds and moon, idly playing with stars. The flawless circulation of celestial cycles depends entirely on the craftsman's hand (symbolizing skillful cultivation). Though the hall is filled with gold and jade (symbolizing internal alchemy achievements), it appears as nothing; with the nation prosperous and people at peace (symbolizing physical-mental harmony), the spirit shines radiantly. The spring scenery in this jade tower is miraculously wondrous—far beyond ordinary orioles, flowers, and green willows.
"Night Wandering Palace" speaks of seeing through worldly toils to enjoy pure leisure, moving freely like solitary clouds. Without attachments, one wanders in perfect ease, with the dragon (yang Qi) and tiger (yin Qi) harmonizing day and night, regularly uniting the crimson maiden (yin) and infant (yang). Nurturing the divine pearl (internal elixir) until it emerges from emptiness, its radiant light reveals the original true face.
"Spring in Jade Hall" declares cultivation is no casual matter—one must resolutely sever worldly ties to seek the great Dao. Extinguishing ignorance and afflictions resembles Mencius nurturing his vast Qi; not fluctuating with human emotions resembles the mechanical well-sweep. Like the sparrowhawk eating little and the quail resting content, naturally free from troubles—though outwardly disheveled, the inner self remains constantly cleansed. When metal (lungs) and wood (liver) mutually generate, the supreme treasure is refined, and spiritual light begins faintly glowing.
Among the thirty "Treading Cloud" poems dedicated to fellow dwellers of Misty Radiance Cave—Immortal Cao, Immortal Gan, and Immortal Zhang—it describes three transcendents from three counties dwelling in unity, transmitting profound oral teachings. By the watercloud stream they wander in joy; within Misty Radiance Cave, all thoughts are forgotten. Refining mercury (Jing) and smelting lead (Qi), balancing dragon and tiger, they quietly cultivate the three Dantian (upper, middle, lower). Upon achieving merit, they'll ride cranes to pay homage to primordial purity (Yuanshi Tianzun), becoming celestial companions in the Great Canopy Heaven (the highest Daoist realm).
Another poem depicts carefree recluses and liberated heroes content in noble poverty, joyfully forgetting worldly affairs. Playing zithers beneath moon and breeze, they summon dragon chants and tiger roars (internal Qi circulation) as companions. Such hermits dwell in mountain forests...
This Daoist nun surnamed Lü was originally an immortal banished from the celestial realm, yet willingly took mortal form to wander the earthly world. Though unkempt and disheveled in appearance, she maintained the transcendent bearing of a Daoist practitioner. Her companions were all cloud-riding, rainbow-traversing immortal friends, never worldly vulgar types. Do not be deceived by external appearances—they are but decaying flesh destined for corruption. Only by severing worldly attachments can one attain a carefree heart, roaming in absolute freedom, ultimately ascending to the immortal palaces of the Great Luo Heaven.
When snowflakes swirl, mountains vanish beneath silver-white robes. These snowflakes drifting through curtains and doorways may seem carefree, yet they herald auspicious omens of abundant harvests for mortals. Like the straw-cloaked fisherman angling alone, or Ziyou visiting Dai on a snowy night—even soaring wine prices cannot dampen such refined pleasures. Why do the people rejoice so? For the coming year shall surely bring bumper crops of the Five Grains.
Feng Shouci! Though love between man and woman may be intimate, none can escape the wheel of life and death. Fame and fortune pass like fleeting clouds—all worldly bonds can be severed with a single stroke. Only through diligent cultivation on the path of longevity can one attain the immortal fruit. Keep the gate of wisdom ever open, firmly lock the door of desires, and chant true scriptures within the sacred space of your spiritual altar. When merit and practice reach fulfillment, you'll naturally ride clouds straight to the Great Luo Heaven, seated upon a lotus throne in the immortal realm.
The Double Ninth Festival's reunion presents the perfect occasion for enlightenment. Why should Ma Yu (one of the Quanzhen Seven Masters) of Fufeng worry about aging? Taming the heart's dragon and mind's tiger to reveal the original luminous pearl—the sooner this pearl manifests, the better. Taking "Yu" (jade) as his given name and "Xuanbao" (Mysterious Treasure) as his courtesy name, he received the fine sobriquet "Wooden Ox" from Master Yunzhong. This practitioner known as Shandong the Mountain Hermit shall achieve immortalhood any day now.
When returning to Xingping to widely expound the teachings, sudden thoughts of home arose. Treading on sedge grass while preparing to return to Chang'an, I only wish people would sooner open their hearts and awaken their minds. Wealth and poverty are heaven-decreed, children and grandchildren predetermined—why fret over fate? Hearing of those in good health who delay cultivation, better to sincerely seek a true master's guidance.
Ma Yu (Daoist name Danyangzi), the Three-Topknot Mountain Man, upon hearing of Lady Zhang's charitable deeds, remarked: "Better retreat to weave nets than covet fish by the abyss." Rather than envy others' blessings, cultivate diligently yourself. Why idly wait to dwell on Penglai's immortal isles? Disheveled and free of worldly concerns, only after a hundred prostrations and incense offerings does one's true heart emerge. May we cultivate in unity with Layman Pang (renowned Tang Dynasty household practitioner) to jointly realize the Great Dao.
Yao Xuanyu of the Twin-Topknot Daoists—your coiled locks conceal the profound mysteries of Yin-Yang. Since receiving your name from Zhongli Quan (one of the Eight Immortals), don't change it lightly. What crowns your head is no mere Daoist hat, but the seal of authentic transmission.
This passage presents several poetic verses from Ma Yu (the Perfected of Danyang), a patriarch of the Quanzhen (Complete Perfection) tradition, taken from his Jianwu Ji (Gradual Awakening Collection). These poems convey a Daoist practitioner's life insights and spiritual attainments. Here's a modern interpretation:
The first poem emphasizes emulating ancient masters in cultivation. While Master Yao may imitate the practices of earlier sages, such efforts prove futile without genuine realization. Practitioners should tend to their nature like trimming a lamp wick, allowing the light of spiritual awareness to shine eternally. Achieving this state enables one to walk on clouds like an immortal, finding true abode in the moonlit jade terraces.
The second verse, addressed to fellow disciple Tan Chuduan, employs the metaphor "Master Zhang drinks wine while Master Li snatches it away" to illustrate how cultivation discourse need not be overly contrived. Ma Yu (referring to himself as Shantong) compares himself to a golden-scaled turtle fish, roaming freely amid clouds and waters. True practitioners shouldn't compete for superiority but should share the mysterious wine like white-robed recluses.
The third poem reflects on Ma Yu's experiences begging for alms with his master. It reveals how the physical body resembles an empty cicada shell, with cultivation's essence lying in mental awakening. With steadfast devotion to the Dao, one may witness miraculous visions like white snow transforming into red hail within sacred grotto-heavens, ultimately becoming a liberated spirit-child who masters the elixir of immortality.
The tea-themed verse suggests supreme-quality tea can dispel drowsiness, surpassing even Confucius dreaming of Duke Zhou or Chen Tuan's legendary sleep cultivation. Citing Lu Tong's "Seven Cups of Tea" and Zen master Zhaozhou's "Go drink tea" koan, it playfully suggests such tea could make one permanently wakeful like the ever-alert disciple Zai Yu.
The final three poems respectively depict:
- The mist-wrapped willows and snow-draped scenery around a Daoist hermitage, where spiritual achievements manifest as auspicious signs;
- The preparation of celestial delicacies with jade vessels during Master Liu's purification feast, subtly mirroring the refinement process of internal alchemy (Neidan);
- The dragon-coiled grapevines bearing crystal fruits resembling lapis lazuli and agate, symbolizing the golden elixir (Jindan) formed through cultivation.
These verses employ rich metaphors from internal alchemy practice, using ordinary phenomena to illuminate cultivation principles. They exemplify the Quanzhen tradition's characteristic approach of "dual cultivation of nature and life" (xingming shuangxiu), where spiritual refinement and physical vitality develop in tandem.
These verses express the cultivation insights of Ma Yu (styled Danyangzi), patriarch of the Quanzhen (Complete Perfection) school of Daoism, using everyday language to describe spiritual states.
The first poem compares spiritual practice to taming a wild horse that ultimately returns to Penglai, the immortal isle. Few truly understand the Dao's methods—one must follow natural laws in cultivation. Through daily practice that opens the meridians and refines Jing-Qi (represented by lead and mercury symbolizing Yin-Yang energies), the Golden Elixir forms, making one a guest in Penglai's celestial realm.
The second uses bamboo curtain weaving as metaphor: wielding the sword of wisdom to sever distractions, weaving warp and weft with "blue threads" (representing true Qi). The finished curtain hangs not on ordinary eaves but in the Quanzhen Hall—revealing true Dao by transcending worldly troubles. Like a moonlit fishing hook piercing the clouds, one ultimately beholds the Dao's true face.
The third recounts his life journey: awakened by his master, he left Mouping County, walked openly through Dongping, cultivated in Xingping, seeking purity and peace. Wandering to Taiping Temple, he maintained equanimity while performing compassionate deeds.
The fourth describes sudden enlightenment: when spiritual clarity dawns unexpectedly, it's like obtaining the pearl beneath the black dragon's chin (symbolizing primordial Qi)—one's true nature shines without obscurity. He avoids worldly competition, content with reclining among clouds and moonlight (hermitic practice).
The fifth advises fellow cultivators: discard false glories, wield wisdom's sword to slay the Three Corpses (greed, anger, delusion), harmonizing turtle-snake (water-fire) energies. Understanding the mystery of "knowing whiteness yet guarding blackness" (Yin-Yang balance), one may tread clouds together.
The sixth thanks for gifted shoes with deeper meaning: Uncle Li's present transcends ordinary footwear—wearing them distances one from red dust, ascending directly to azure skies. The final verse to a blacksmith friend says: escape the smelting furnace (mundane existence), wander unburdened. Tuning the qin (cultivation) at dawn and dusk brings tranquility, awakening the spiritual child (original Shen)—this flavor surpasses worldly pleasures.
These poetic passages from The Gradual Awakening Collection reveal the life insights and spiritual states of Daoist practitioners. The first segment depicts a cultivator's constant joy, likened to eight streams converging into beaded pearls—yet who truly comprehends such a state? Only those who grasp the essence of being "new to the Dao" (Xinjin Dao) may attain the enduring bliss of Chang'an.
In For Elder Zhang, the forty-year-old recipient is admonished: at midlife, one should stabilize the unmoving mind, ever mindful that life's impermanence weighs as heavily as golden manacles and jade fetters. Awaken swiftly, planting virtuous seeds without delay. Outwardly feigning simplicity while inwardly lucid, cultivate inner De (Virtue) until merit ripens—then tread auspicious clouds and ride fragrant winds to audience with the Celestial Worthy of Primordial Beginning (Yuanshi Tianzun, Daoism's supreme deity).
The author recalls ancestral history: four brothers displaced by late Tang turmoil settled across Shandong, his lineage taking root beneath Mount Cuo'e in Yunyang. Three centuries of familial vicissitudes remain unspoken. Now ordained by karmic chance, he wanders beyond Tong Pass, transcendent as one returning home.
Verses for Wu Shou's Birthday Ritual documents the Zhaijiao (purification rite): meticulously prepared are green petitions (Qingci, divine missives), yellow talismans (Huanglu), and offerings of incense, tea, wine, and fruit. Bell and chime vibrations pierce the empyrean as ceremonial solemnity summons swirling auspicious Qi. Golden Boys and Jade Maidens (celestial attendants) relay messages swiftly. Beyond longevity like pines, it prays benevolent souls share immortal blessings.
Another passage describes cultivation's apogee: the heart-moon cools, merit fills hallowed chambers, while numinous radiance from Mount Kunlun (Daoist sacred peak) emanates in myriad beams. Never boasting celestial attainment before mortals, the silent heart-guardian's name already graces immortal registers. Serenely viewing Chang'an's panorama, he personally gathers golden blossoms and jade stamens (emblems of alchemical fruition).
Gratitude for Master Yu's Shoes transforms footwear into a vow: henceforth each step departs the red dust, severing worldly attachments. Probing mysterious truths, enlightened by his master's guidance, he journeys far. When merit-work culminates, cloud-ascension beckons—the shoe-giver invited to join his flight to azure heavens.
The final stanza expounds practice: ears absorb golden scriptures (Jinjing), mouth refines jade cakes (symbolic pure sustenance), hand wields elephant-quill brushes to inscribe heart-seals. Though mundane affairs clamor, true Suchness remains unstained. Realizing original nature demands diligent inner observation (Neiguan)—dwelling in dust yet untainted. Achieving "true constancy's response" (Zhenchang Ying, unity with Dao), the embryonic immortal (Taixian, Neidan achievement) manifests, ultimately attaining the eternal stillness of true constancy (Zhenchang Ding).
The Gradual Awakening Collection contains profound Daoist cultivation concepts, primarily discussing the attainment of transcendence through Neidan (internal alchemy) practice. Let me explain section by section:
The first passage describes how practitioners must grasp the Yin-Yang energies within their bodies (symbolized by the sun and moon) as skillfully as catching flying birds or running rabbits, allowing them to merge in the Dantian (the "cavernous heaven"). When cultivation reaches a certain stage, a nectar-like fluid emerges within, dispersing distracting thoughts (floating clouds) while retaining only refined Qi (thin mist). At this stage, one frequently resonates with immortals and ultimately achieves a pure Yang body (Dan Yang), ascending through Dao realization (facing the celestial origin).
The second acrostic poem offers cultivation instructions for Master Xue. It emphasizes that the secret method is extraordinary—one must regulate the body's water and fire (Kan and Li) like nurturing a luminous pearl. The poem suggests temporary separation between partners (abstinence during cultivation), using spiritual medicine (the ritual jade tablet) to refine the Golden Elixir (celestial palace). Finally, it advises subduing the "mind monkey" (scattered thoughts), reflecting Ma Yu's (one of the Quanzhen Seven Masters) wandering cultivation method.
The third section is Shan Tong's (Wang Chongyang's Daoist name) personal account. He laments that people only know his name without understanding his true cultivation purpose. Having abandoned wealth and desires to focus on profound mysteries, he ultimately attained Dao and eternal immortality. Here "Qingming" (literally "clear brightness") refers both to the solar term and the luminous nature of Dao—true clarity resides not in external scenery but in the eternal purity within.
The fourth passage reveals the mystery of mid-autumn cultivation. While ordinary people admire the external beauty of the Mid-Autumn Festival, true cultivation focuses internally—stillness of thought (cessation), severance of worldly ties (complete cutoff), and congealing of the Golden Elixir (gold meeting mid-autumn). The perfected Dao-nature becomes as full as the mid-autumn moon.
The fifth section's "Yang Pass" refers to a crucial energy point in cultivation. By clearing the Yang Pass pathway and opening its gate, this immaculate passage becomes the meeting place for cultivation partners (Yin-Yang energies within). Understanding its profound mystery enables great Dao realization here.
The concluding passages repeatedly emphasize the importance of "Chongyang" (Wang Chongyang's name, also symbolizing pure Yang attainment). Master Wang Chongyang refined the supreme Chongyang treasure, while the author built a hermitage for Chongyang's Dao. Through cultivation, all Yin qualities were eliminated (complete Yin extinction), life essence gathered, and immortality achieved. The closing expresses gratitude to Master Fengxian (Wang Chongyang) for enlightening this stubborn disciple to perceive true joy and practice alongside the master.
These poems consistently reflect Quanzhen School's Neidan philosophy, stressing dual cultivation of nature and life (Xingming Shuangxiu), subduing mental distractions, and harmonizing Yin-Yang energies to form the elixir and realize Dao.
This passage contains several poems from the Daoist classic Gradual Enlightenment Collection, primarily describing the process and states of spiritual cultivation and enlightenment. Here's an explanation in plain language:
Like an old horse pulling a salt cart all day under the lash, one sighs over long-suppressed vitality. How can a sickly steed frequent pleasure grounds? Only when encountering an enlightened teacher—a "Bo Le" (legendary horse connoisseur)—does awakening come. After much struggle, freedom is redeemed, and vows are made to repay the master's grace.
When the Three Officials of Heaven, Earth, and Water (Daoist celestial deities) descend to the mortal realm, the sudden roar of a tiger echoes from Kaiyuan Temple. The Wind Master and Rain God grow silent, attentively serving aged parents. Through vivid imagery—a crimson serpent devouring an elephant, a black ox driving a jeweled chariot—the mystical state of perfected spiritual achievement is revealed.
No longer chasing fame and fortune, one aspires only to follow the Three Pure Ones (highest Daoist divinities). Zhongli Quan and Lü Dongbin (two of the Eight Immortals) are dispatched as examiners, judging not by literary talent but by genuine cultivation. Accumulating three thousand merits and reaching the Xiyi (tranquil non-action) state qualifies one for the immortal register.
A poem dedicated to fellow practitioner Han Shouxuan describes carefree wandering without constraints—moving, staying, sitting, or reclining with the ease of clouds and water. Those who truly grasp liberation nurture Qi within this freedom. Such transcendence is priceless, enabling ascension to Penglai, the isle of immortals.
On tea as spiritual practice: Fine tea need not be offered to fame-seekers. Wuwei tea and natural tea are heaven's gifts to cultivators—drinking them fuels tireless refinement. Purple Mushroom Decoction (elixir) grows more fragrant with brewing; one cup erases worldly cares. Cinnabar Elixir clarifies host and guest distinctions, allowing one to ride clouds before the Jade Emperor.
Poems for Liu Chuxuan and Meng Siyuan: Seeing through worldly affairs brings repose; the mutual generation of Metal and Wood softens the heart-mind. Forging the Golden Elixir enables flight to the Ten Islets of Immortals. After dreaming of the Yellow Emperor, one abandons fields and gardens, finding it hard to match Meng Siyuan's hermit style while focusing on inner cultivation. Taming the "mind-monkey and thought-horse," recognizing one's origin—like a small snake overlooking a giant turtle—Pure Yang energy pays homage to Taiyuan (referring to Patriarch Lü).
Meeting Patriarch Chongyang (Wang Chongyang), one tends azure sheep, seeking not empty fame but luminous inner nature. Admiring the untrammeled spirit of Xunzi and Yang Xiong, one openly comprehends profound truths. Journeying to Nanjing to welcome the coffin of Wind Immortal (Patriarch Ma Danyang) demonstrates sincere devotion to the Dao.
Ma Yu (Daoist name Danyangzi), while practicing asceticism through begging in Chang'an, deeply missed his master Wang Chongyang (Daoist name Chongyangzi) after two years of separation. He described his longing as tormenting as being hung upside down, yet persisted in cultivation despite poverty, achieving the Dao-path among numerous sages.
Calling himself "Mashan Dong," Ma Yu emphasized that his uniqueness among cultivators lay in his unwavering sincerity. He observed that while Eastern and Western practitioners followed different methods, the Dao-affinity recognized by wise eyes was equally precious. Having relinquished competitive desires, he emulated Wang Chongyang (nicknamed "Harmful Wind") in seeing through worldly illusions, ultimately destined to return to the Three Immortal Mountains of Penglai. With his triple-knotted Daoist topknot (symbolizing devotion to the Three Pure Ones), he maintained childlike purity while focusing on guiding destined seekers.
During his practice in Nanjing, he realized the true meaning of the Ninefold Golden Elixir (the highest stage of Neidan) transmitted by Wang Chongyang, transcending fame and disgrace. As the triple-knotted Daoist, Ma Yu had severed worldly attachments—why worry about his innate nature lacking clarity?
In a poem for Immortal Zhang, he revealed cultivation essentials: first subdue the "mind-monkey and thought-horse" (restless thoughts) until the breath becomes continuous and subtle. When the Yin-Yang energies (dragon and tiger) harmonize within, the Golden Elixir naturally coalesces like jade cradling floral stamen.
For Immortal Ren, verses contrasted his transformation: once chasing external objects like a hunter (falcon on left arm, hound on right), now freed from all entanglements. Drinking celestial dew, auspicious Qi filled his Dantian (crimson chamber), attaining the Dao in serene emptiness (holding the jade scepter in non-being).
Practitioners kindle the silver lamp (symbolizing heart-fire), tame dragon and tiger (balancing Yin-Yang), and roam freely while circulating cosmic Qi. Seeing through the body’s illusion, they finally witness golden lotuses encircling jeweled canopies (signs of realization), comprehending the Dao’s profundity.
In a letter to fellow disciple Qiu Chuji (Daoist name Changchunzi), he expressed profound longing for reunion. Poems entrusted to azure phoenixes and cranes emphasized cultivation’s completeness: practice must be perfected, conduct wholehearted, and the refinement of Jing-Qi-Shen (child-mother energies) harmonized—why fear innate nature’s incompleteness? He cherished moonlit wanderings, realizing the truth of roundness in day and night.
Recalling dreams of meeting Wang Chongyang (Chongyangzi) and Lü Dongbin (Chunyangzi), he burned heart-incense honoring Zhongli Quan (Zhengyangzi), grateful for the three patriarchs’ guidance. Through cultivating Yin-Yang and consolidating primordial Yang, he beheld five-colored auroras encircling the sun (Yang-spirit accomplishment).
Awakening cultivators startle at fame’s mirage—extinguish worldly hearts. When moonlight stabilizes their nature, they ascend counterflow to the jade capital (celestial realm), while the Golden Elixir (yellow sprout) grows steadily within.
The Gradual Awakening Collection presents several poems conveying the wisdom of Daoist practitioners who see through worldly illusions to pursue transcendence.
The first poem suggests that no amount of property or land compares to relinquishing attachments and reducing mundane distractions—only by seeking the true Dao can one attain real benefit. Heaven and earth follow their own rhythms; wealth and glory inevitably fade. In the cycle of rebirth, such external things cannot bind us.
The poem dedicated to "Wei the Mad Immortal" praises him: This "Mad Wind Immortal" has already forgotten worldly affairs, wholly devoted to comprehending the profound celestial principles. He harmonizes the Yin and Yang within (symbolized by mercury and lead, representing the two vital energies), forming the Golden Elixir (the golden lotus symbolizing neidan). Through the ninefold refinement process, his mind becomes as luminous as the full moon, ultimately transcending the ordinary to attain sagehood.
The poem encouraging monastic life advises: Practitioners should maintain a state of wuwei (non-action), unwavering in purpose. Within, nurture compassion; outwardly, embody simplicity. Release overthinking and attachments. By persisting in cultivation (the "knife and spoon" refer to alchemical tools, representing practice), one will eventually realize the Dao.
The repeated phrases "pure and clear," "awake and aware" emphasize the importance of a tranquil mind. Guard your spiritual nature to let inner wisdom shine forth.
An exhortation to practice without delay: Life is as fleeting as a mirage. Recognize the truth of existence and swiftly cultivate the priceless treasure (referring to neidan). Upon achieving merit, you will ascend to immortal realms (Penglai, the isle of immortals).
To female practitioners, it says: Learn the path of purity from Ma Gu (a Daoist immortaless). Outwardly simple, inwardly luminous—success in practice leads to ascension to the Jade Capital (abode of the immortals).
To fellow seekers, it advises: Do not grieve for others; focus on your own cultivation. Seek the true Dao early, nourishing the inner spirit (shen). With attainment, you may become like Lü Dongbin, a realized immortal.
In the Gazing Toward Penglai series, medicinal herbs (like saposhnikovia root, ophiopogon tuber, and cistanche) metaphorically represent cultivation methods, depicting alchemical refinement (cinnabar symbolizing the elixir) and ascension. Ma Yu (Master Horse Wind) practices alone—his inner lamp outshines daylight, his heart-moon illuminates the clouds, and he holds the herb of immortality (purple ganoderma). Though surrounded by celestial wine and music, the lack of kindred spirits remains a regret.
Finally, Ma Yu recounts abandoning wealth and status for an ascetic life. Though surviving on begged scraps, he attains true purity.
Ma Fengzi, a Daoist practitioner, was once deeply entangled in worldly affairs, desperately seeking liberation but finding no path forward. Just as one must ask those who have climbed the mountain to know its trails, he later encountered the enlightened Master Fengxian, who showed him a shortcut to transcend the mundane. This path was precise and unfailing, filling him with eternal gratitude for his master's guidance.
Reflecting on his past, when he was trapped in the bonds of family life, it felt like being scorched by raging flames—his days filled with fear, trembling, and bitter tears, regretting his late awakening. After weeping, he thanked his master for freeing him from the prison of worldly dust. From then on, he devoted himself wholeheartedly to cultivating the "Dharma Gate of Non-Duality" (the supreme state of Daoist practice), attaining carefree joy in comprehending the profound mysteries of heaven, even glimpsing the possibility of reaching the legendary Jasper Pool (the immortal abode of the Queen Mother of the West).
Hearing the autumn cicadas' cries, he observed how they sustained themselves on dew yet never ceased their clamor—their voices betraying their presence. In contrast, the dung beetle could transcend and transform. This led him to reflect: How could humans, with their conscience, betray the Three Lights (sun, moon, and stars)? One must swiftly refine the "Lead Frost" (a Neidan term referring to the cultivation of Jing and Qi).
Before the Double Ninth Festival, he ascended Dragon Mountain early to admire the chrysanthemums, avoiding the melancholy of poets like Zheng Gu of the Tang Dynasty, who lamented the fleeting beauty of life. Ma Fengzi saw deeper meaning: The fragrance of the festival's chrysanthemums symbolized the undying fruits of spiritual practice, eternally vibrant with joy.
On the day of the festival, while others busied themselves admiring flowers and discussing the refined tastes of Tao Yuanming or the carefree charm of Meng Jia (a Jin Dynasty scholar) losing his hat—all ultimately illusions—Ma Fengzi perceived the true splendor: nurturing Yang within Yang (a Neidan method), like the wooden ox (a Daoist ritual object) guiding the herd to the pasture (a metaphor for spiritual attainment), forever celebrating the essence of the Double Ninth.
After the festival, as the chrysanthemums began to wither, poets like Zheng Gu might again sigh in sorrow. But Ma Fengzi saw differently: The endless clouds knew their homeward path, and the golden lotus (a sacred Daoist flower) never fades—the joy of the Daoist practitioner is everlasting.
The Great Dao (Dao) need not be sought in distant lands; the key lies in maintaining the purity and ease of drifting clouds and flowing water. Roaming freely with the "Charming Maiden and Infant" (Neidan terms for Yin and Yang energies) is a truth few comprehend. Having fully realized this, Ma Fengzi danced lightly through the streets, moving with the wind's freedom—even hanging the bright moon on his staff to play (a metaphor for the liberated state of enlightenment).
This passage contains several poetic verses from The Gradual Enlightenment Collection (Jianwu Ji), a compilation of spiritual insights by Ma Yu (Daoist name Danyangzi, also known as Ma Fengzi), the founding patriarch of the Quanzhen (Complete Perfection) school of Daoism. The verses expound on the necessity for practitioners to transcend worldly desires and devote themselves wholeheartedly to spiritual cultivation.
The first poem emphasizes that cultivators must sever covetous thoughts, remain grateful to their teachers, and persevere in long-term practice. True cultivation is not bound by formalities; what matters is aligning with like-minded companions in shared pursuit of the immortal path. "Yingzhou," the legendary mountain-island of immortals, symbolizes the state of Daoist realization. Practitioners should regard worldly passions as adversaries, remain indifferent to wealth and status, and withdraw from emotional entanglements to focus on refining the inner elixir (Neidan). "True fire" refers to the primordial yang Qi in internal alchemy, while "clear stream" represents the purity of one's innate nature.
The second verse suggests that seclusion in remote mountains is not essential for cultivation—what truly matters is maintaining transcendence amid worldly life. The "wooden ox" (a mythical creature in Daoist lore) and "stone maiden" (representing passion-free adepts) serve as metaphors for realizing the Dao through ordinary existence.
The third poem critiques those who prioritize external displays over inner cultivation. Building pagodas, erecting temples, or commissioning statues—if done for vanity rather than genuine practice—only accumulates negative karma. Ma Yu confesses his remorse for harming insects during construction work, illustrating how compassion must guide spiritual practice.
The fourth verse reflects on his own shortcomings: though dwelling within monastery walls (symbolized by "circular walls"), his pursuit of poetic fame hindered true cultivation. Authentic practice requires humility, free from intellectual ostentation.
The fifth poem uses springtime imagery to illustrate aligning with natural rhythms. The "earthen ox" (a clay figurine broken during spring festivals) represents shattering attachments. "Neither person nor ox is seen" echoes Chan Buddhist paradoxes, pointing to transcendent non-duality. "Moonlit clarity" symbolizes the awakened state of luminous mind-awareness.
The final Xijiang Yue lyric speaks of seeing through worldly ties and joyfully leaving his homeland to practice in the scenic Qin region (modern Shaanxi). Originally from Fufeng, Shaanxi, Ma Yu later followed Wang Chongyang in spiritual pursuit—these verses reflect his monastic journey.
Living long in the Daoist temple, transcending the mundane world with carefree ease. No need to send letters home—now is the time to return to the immortal realm (referring to achieving Daoist immortality), no longer bound to the dust of the ordinary world. A fellow Daoist from Chang’an kindly gifted me a new robe.
Yesterday, I still wore tattered robes, but this morning I changed into fresh attire. If anyone asks the reason, it is the deep affection of my Daoist companion. Yet I fear that wearing such fine garments may invite suspicion—truthfully, the simple straw cloak and bamboo hat of a Daoist are most fitting. Only by living in humble purity can one sleep soundly. Inwardly, I constantly reflect on my own faults, while my mouth refrains from discussing the rights and wrongs of others. The world chases fame and profit, but I alone abide in serene wuwei (non-action). Even if I must beg for food in the streets, I feel no shame.
Daily, I feast on the jade stamens (referring to the nourishing saliva during meditation), and at all times, I drink deeply of the "knife and spoon" (a Neidan term). Only when the true yang energy manifests within (signifying cultivation success) will the genuine skill of Daoist practice be revealed.
Written for Wu Zhigang: To cultivate the Dao, one must distance oneself from wife and children, abandon wealth, wine, and sensual pleasures, and sever all attachments. Eradicate forever the worries and idle thoughts, preventing deluded notions from arising. Dwelling beyond worldly concerns, maintaining inner purity—this is true practice, worthy of being called a disciple of the Quanzhen (Complete Perfection) tradition.
Another verse: In cultivating the Dao, one need not obsess over guiding techniques nor adorn the outer form. Go against worldly conventions, abide in wuwei, free as flowing water or drifting clouds. Persist in virtuous practice, and if fortunate, you may slay the Three Corpses (malevolent spirits within the body), letting your spirit shine like the moon illuminating the Jade Pool—only then will you understand the supreme simplicity of the Great Dao.
Written for the Serene Wanderer: First, subdue the deluded mind; second, sever idle thoughts; third, abstain from gossip; fourth, prevent worldly thoughts from arising; fifth, nourish the vital essence and qi; sixth, maintain the state of wuwei; seventh, ensure both merit and practice remain unblemished; eighth, transcend the ordinary and enter the sacred.
Written for the Moonlit Wanderer: First, the Daoist scriptures thread like jade through blossoms; second, like the sun and moon refining each other (a Neidan term); third, as qi circulates through the celestial orbits and returns to the dantian; fourth, akin to wandering freely across the four seas. Fifth, witness the five-colored radiance manifest; sixth, transform the six desires into blue lotuses; seventh, let the true nature coalesce, the light of essence perfected; eighth, like a vajra subduing all evils.
Additional note: Patriarch Chongyang (Wang Chongyang) practiced cultivation at Difei Mountain, and Patriarch Lü (Lü Dongbin) specifically sent me wandering to seek the profound. When I journeyed to Dongmou in search of guidance, he awakened both me and my wife. Ten times he divided pears to enlighten us (an allusion to Wang Chongyang’s awakening of Ma Yu and his wife), a hundred days we spent in secluded practice, a thousand poems urging people to turn back, and together we drank the immortal wine of ten thousand kalpas.
Another note: Never ashamed of disheveled hair and a dusty face, never disdainful of plain tea and simple meals, never humbled by begging to sustain life.
The first passage speaks of how the impoverished need not envy wealth and glory—by persisting in cultivation, one will eventually achieve complete merit and ascend as an immortal. Then, Heaven will bestow celestial attire: the star-adorned crown (a Taoist headpiece) and moon-embroidered cape, treading upon clouds with jade pendants chiming, radiating majestic dignity.
The second passage states that while the world clings to life and fears death, I understand the principle of "living toward death." Few tread this path of cultivation—only those truly awakened can relinquish worldly ties and advance with fierce dedication. Don’t say the "Mysterious Origin" (the Dao) is incomprehensible; to me, it’s simple—preserve your innate simplicity, abandon cunning and cleverness, and Heaven and Earth will naturally return to stillness. These words are offered to the Quiet Wanderer (a title for a cultivator).
The third passage warns practitioners: there’s no need to deliberately seek "Dragon and Tiger" (Yin and Yang Qi) or "Infant and Maiden" (Neidan terminology), nor be misled by the empty names of lead and mercury alchemy. Simply maintain inner serenity and wuwei (non-action), extend compassion to one another, and refine Jing (essence), Qi (vital energy), and Shen (spirit) to achieve immortality.
The fourth passage distills the Great Dao into six words: "natural, serene, wuwei (non-action)." Those who embody this can reach the state of "Xi Yi" (the supreme Taoist realm), where perception transcends the physical senses. A purified heart brings spontaneous joy; governing through wuwei allows divine wandering through the void, ascending to the Jade Pool or the Three Isles and Ten Continents to join the immortals’ gathering.
The fifth passage emphasizes avoiding empty talk of "Li Dragon and Kan Tiger" (Bagua directions) or "Yellow Sprouts and Crimson Marrow" (Neidan ingredients). The true key lies in relinquishing thought, forgetting contrivance, clarifying the spirit, and nurturing vast Qi (energy). Wuwei and non-striving are the correct path—expansive spiritual clarity is most precious.
The sixth passage describes the stages of cultivation: maintaining simplicity requires patience. When the refined Qi of the Three Terraces stars (Taoist constellations) descends, the inner landscape resonates with dragon roars and tiger growls, bathed in moonlight and gentle breezes. Five-colored auroras envelop the body, the divine pearl (inner elixir) forms and sheds its shell, until—with a thunderous crack—the Heavenly Gate opens. Even Shan Tong (Ma Yu’s self-reference) marvels at this wonder. These words are for Ren Shouyi.
The seventh passage lists precepts for cultivation: First, never disrespect the master or the teachings. Second, follow the serene scriptures. Third, nurture Jing, Qi, and Shen. Fourth, sweep away worldly toil. Fifth, extinguish ignorant karmic fires. Sixth, sever mundane attachments. Seventh, tame the restless mind. Eighth, partake of the jade nectar.
The final passage depicts alchemical refinement: by the snowy riverbank, the miraculous Yellow Sprouts (elixir material) of Yin-Yang transformation are discovered. Ground and brewed into divine water, drinking it leads straight to the Jade Pool—its flavor surpassing even Lu Tong’s (a Tang dynasty tea connoisseur) finest brew. This reflects the lives of Qiu Chuji, Liu Chuxuan, Tan Chuduan, and Ma Yu (four of the Quanzhen Seven Masters), who, under Master Wang Chongyang, renounced splendor to cultivate in transcendent freedom.
This Gradual Awakening Collection employs meticulously parallel couplets to depict the cultivator's transcendence of worldly concerns in pursuit of authentic selfhood. Ma Yu (Daoist name Danyangzi) crafts an ethereal, mystical atmosphere through layered repetitions of phrases.
The opening verses describe the Daoist lifestyle: neither engaging in debates about right and wrong nor clinging to refined worldly pleasures like music and chess. One follows nature's rhythms—drinking morning mists when thirsty, remaining clear-headed and unrestrained even when intoxicated. A cascade of repeated phrases emphasizes distancing from mundane disturbances, relinquishing attachments, nurturing goodwill, and maintaining a mind attuned to the mysterious (xuan), ensuring the true nature remains forever luminous.
The second section addresses the attitude of cultivation: approach all things with careful awareness, maintaining a reverent and vigilant practice. Only through daily purification and constant clarity can the radiance of spiritual wisdom shine eternally. The poet advises the couple surnamed Liu to emulate the exemplary cultivation of Xu Xun (the Perfected Lord Xu) and Pang Degong (the Elder Pang), cultivating together in harmony. Should disagreements arise, they should part willingly, roaming freely like solitary clouds or wild cranes.
The third section discusses dietary practice: true immortals do not drink ordinary wine but savor the natural jade nectar (referring to internal fluids). They sip the fragrance of blossoms beneath the moon and before the wind, reclining in celestial palaces after satiation. The text underscores that Daoist learning requires abstaining from meat, as it severs compassion. Though the five pungent spices (garlic, onions, etc.) may delight the palate, they fuel desires—far inferior to the nourishing essence of grains.
Finally, the verses reveal the essential method of cultivation: there is no need to obsess over the positions of the five viscera or scrutinize the Bagua (Zhen, Dui, Kan, Li representing four trigrams). The true mystery lies in absorbing heaven and earth's essence (symbolized by the rivers Jiang, Huai, and Ji, representing the virtue of water from all directions), gathering spirit, qi, and blood in the Dantian (elixir field). Only thus can one transcend the ordinary and attain sagehood. The text emphasizes practicing diligently at all times, with no shame in awakening to the Dao. Though the celestial secrets of "three before three, three after three" (a Daoist term referring to cyclical stages of inner alchemy) remain unspoken, the poet urges preserving one's innate nature, pure as jade.
The Gradual Awakening Collection presents several poems dedicated to fellow Daoist practitioners, revealing essential cultivation methods for those walking the path.
The first poem states: Only by seeing through worldly desires (symbolized by "silkworms" representing wealth) can one transcend material attachments and pursue the Dao. The true profound mystery (Xuantan) is inherently complete—neither increasing nor diminishing.
The verses for Yao Shouqing and Li Shoujing advise: To study the Dao, one must distance oneself from the red dust (the "fire courtyard" symbolizes the mundane world) and seek an enlightened teacher (good affinity). Maintain the purity of your original nature and cease seeking externally. While wandering freely (like "clouds and water"), understand the importance of cultivating both inner and outer aspects, firmly restraining the restless mind (the "galloping horse and unruly monkey" symbolize wandering thoughts). Only by relinquishing all attachments can one realize the true self and fulfill the great vow of cultivation.
The poem for Mr. Dang explains: True seated meditation surpasses mere formal sitting; when thoughts settle, delusions naturally vanish. The body remains still as withered wood, yet the mind is serene and at ease. Transcending worldly concerns ensures no defilement can taint you. Nurturing Qi does not depend on forced breathing, and harmonizing the Shen (spirit) lies in mastering the proper timing (Choutian refers to internal adjustments during practice). Through prolonged cultivation in deep mountain caves, one will ultimately form the inner elixir (Taixian, the embryonic immortal).
The poem for Mr. Sun emphasizes: Cultivation requires the dual refinement of nature and life (Xingming Shuangxiu), and nurturing life need not involve excess. Only through pure practice can one return to the origin (Yuanchu), while practical action must relieve suffering and aid the distressed. Beyond this, there is no contrivance—live simply like a fledgling or quail, appearing carefree and foolish, yet already possessing the qualifications for immortality (the Sanqing represent the highest celestial realm).
Written while attending Master Hu’s vegetarian feast: The plain meal I prepare is naturally delicious, needing no seasoning to be sweet. Each bite carries its own fragrance, and after eating, the foundation (Genyuan) grows firmer. Wandering immortal realms, body and mind feel light.
The poem for Duan Zhiyi states: A cultivator wears simple cloth (Busu), harbors compassion, and avoids rich delicacies. Free and unfettered, he dwells in a thatched hut among the clouds (Yun’an). Once sharp-witted, now seemingly dull—this is great wisdom appearing as folly. Master Duan, don’t call me stingy; all I possess is mist and smoke.
Another verse reflects: Sometimes reclining in cultivation surpasses sitting; authenticity is what matters in practice. A false shell cannot achieve realization—why feign piety only at death’s door (Zhuoxiang, clinging to form)? Revealing the key to ascension: becoming an immortal is merely the sublimation of the Shen (divine light). The celestial palace has no use for a stinking corpse—better to discard it deep in the mountains.
Finally, an acrostic poem for the ancient hermit Gu: Master Gu’s surname means "ancient," yet he speaks no empty theories ("zhi hu" pedantry). True effort lies in grasping the profound mystery; the Dao is found in daily life. Even a man can gestate a sacred embryo (producing an "infant," referring to Neidan); turning back, he naturally understands. I meant to speak only of purity, yet feared others might misunderstand and waver. The secret of the dragon and tiger’s union (a Neidan term) sounds strange at first but becomes clear upon reflection. Too lazy to debate "infants and maidens" (Neidan terms), I only worry others will speculate wildly.
This scripture primarily describes how cultivators attain true joy by comprehending the Mysterious Gate (Daoist cultivation methods) and freeing themselves from ignorance. It mentions that during practice, practitioners are accompanied by the Golden Crow (sun) and Jade Rabbit (moon), symbolizing the harmonization of Yin and Yang.
The cultivator must gather their scattered mind like a fishing net capturing fish, thereby transforming dullness. The reference to "nourishing an infant" points to Neidan (internal alchemy) practice where one nurtures the primordial Qi (Yuanjing) within the body as if raising a child. The Dragon Boat Festival is highlighted as an auspicious time when this vital energy begins to stir.
Historical figures like Fan Li and Zhang Liang were able to retire after achieving success because they understood the importance of remaining vigilant during times of glory, never clinging to fame or merit. When asked why one should leave worldly splendor (Fufeng representing the capital), the text explains that true immortals (fengxian) will personally come to awaken one's spiritual awareness.
Practitioners seek transcendent freedom through the "double nine" cycles (representing complete cultivation periods), finding contentment in quiet poverty. They must avoid currying favor with the powerful (visiting noble houses), preserve their inner true nature, and transcend the constraints of the Three Powers (heaven, earth, and humanity). The Zi (midnight) and Wu (noon) hours are crucial cultivation periods, while Mao and You represent the east-west axis. The White Tiger and Azure Dragon symbolize the body's Yin and Yang energies, resonating together like phoenixes calling to each other.
The text criticizes greed as destructive to pure cultivation—stealing peaches of immortality (metaphor for improper attainment of cultivation results) leads to expulsion from the celestial realm. True immortal material (pillar timber) won't remain buried in the mundane world, as the Great Luo Heaven (highest Daoist celestial realm) has its own arrangements. After achieving the Ninefold Golden Elixir (highest level of Neidan), one returns to the celestial realm, free from rebirth.
Cultivators must maintain Wuwei (non-action) purity like frost and snow, undisturbed by worldly affairs. In the Twin Groves (place of practice), they dance with cloud-like sleeves as the ninefold cinnabar (cultivation achievement) generates purple mist, while jade-like streams nourish golden mountains (all representing internal cultivation phenomena). Yet finding kindred spirits remains difficult.
Authentic practice must occur beyond worldly affairs (transcendent realm), exploring the mysterious origin. Practitioners must firmly control the restless mind (monkey-heart and horse-mind), first subduing the internal dragon and tiger (Yin-Yang energies), thereby naturally causing lead and mercury (alchemical substances) to return to their positions. When the primordial spirit (Yuanshen) coalesces, one attains the perfect state of dual cultivation of nature and life (Xingming Shuangxiu).
Finally, the text describes wandering to the Meipi cultivation site, discovering it resembles the Jade Pool paradise. People wonder why no verses are left here—yet the jeweled writings on the walls (representing fellow cultivators' achievements) already shine brilliantly, needing no additional words. The teachings given to Lord Zhao convey that while myriad methods may guide people, severing worldly attachments ultimately depends on one's own awakening.
This passage is a selection from Gradual Awakening Collection by Ma Yu (styled Danyangzi), patriarch of the Quanzhen (Complete Perfection) tradition. Through several poetic verses, it expresses insights into Daoist cultivation. Here's a vernacular interpretation:
On Life, Death, and Cultivation:
When one truly comprehends the great matter of life and death, worldly affections naturally fall away. Only by forgetting cunning intentions can one nourish Qi (vital energy) and Shen (spirit). Maintaining a state of simple Wuwei (non-action), a purified heart aligns with the fundamental truth of the Dao.
Poem for Fellow Practitioners in Nanjing:
I regret lacking karmic connection to practice in Daliang (Kaifeng), nor do I force myself to imitate ancient sages. Thinking of friends by Yimen (Kaifeng's east gate), I regulate "water and fire" (Neidan terminology for balancing Yin-Yang) within these walls. When will you all transcend worldly fluctuations? Ma Yu (Shantong) reminds you: awaken from this "yellow millet dream" (metaphor for illusory life).
Remembering Hu Zijin of Wuwei Hermitage:
Recalling Daoist Hu of Zhongtiao Mountain—his presence purified like golden waves and jade nectar. Now beholding Wuwei Hermitage's profundity, I remember each character shining like pearls. This radiant wisdom is irresistible.
Essential Teachings for Immortal Zhao's Alchemy:
First: Resolve to pursue the Dao, abandoning fame and profit.
Second: Purge worldly dust to clarify Qi and refresh Shen.
Third: Unite the Three Radiances (sun/moon/stars) to safeguard eternal peace.
Fourth: Transcend the four seasons to perceive true Dao.
Fifth: Gather and refine five-colored auroras to form the Golden Elixir.
Sixth: When donning the six-zhu immortal robe, celestial cranes will welcome you.
Further Reflections on Hu Zijin:
Lecturer Hu of Zhongtiao Mountain embodies wisdom, penetrating the mysteries of Confucianism, Buddhism, and Daoism. He naturally realizes such profundity: like the "stone maiden" (symbolizing pure Yin) drunkenly returning to the "golden tiger's" (pure Yang) cave, or an "iron ox" (steadfast will) plowing the "fire dragon's" (alchemical practice) pool. Achieving the "fetal immortality" (Neidan accomplishment), he gathers purple lingzhi (symbol of the Golden Elixir).
Admonition to Practitioners:
Seventy years vanish like arrows—half the night already gone, how lamentable! With impermanence approaching daily, why cling to mortal attachments? Consider death's omen (folk belief: shoes separating at death)—what use for sentimental bonds? Better transcend the mundane to wander in carefree joy.
Guidance for Immortals Xie and Liu:
I urge you to study the Scripture of Clarity and Stillness, breaking free from rigid immortality formulas. Profound is the principle of serene tranquility—maintain the "true constancy" to respond to all things, naturally becoming desireless and thoughtless. Let the sun and moon's course (symbolizing Yin-Yang transformations) become your intimates.
For Liu Chuxuan:
Cultivation emphasizes Wuwei—no need to angle like Jiang Ziya fishing for rewards. Constant clarity and stillness form the foundation. When the "jade nectar" (Neidan term) circulates unhindered, the mind clears; when "golden light" (elixir radiance) bathes you, original nature forgets cunning. Liu Chuxuan already comprehends the mysteries of heaven, earth, and humanity.
For Carefree Masters "Clear Breeze" and "Bright Moon":
True skill lies in attaining the thoughtless state, circulating clear breezes deep in the "jade hall" (Dantian). Inverting Yin-Yang (Neidan method) forges the crimson Golden Elixir (great medicine). Ten thousand streams of "cold springs" (vital Qi) nourish the alchemical cauldron (Dantian). The "bright moon" (true Yin) rises from Guifeng (crown point), revealing your original face to ascend directly to immortal realms.
Self-Reflection:
Formerly, I acted with cunning, seizing upon others' vitality like plunder. Secretly planting brambles and barriers...
The poetry in The Gradual Awakening Collection reveals the life wisdom and spiritual insights of Quanzhen (Complete Perfection) Daoist practitioners. Ma Yu (the Perfected of Danyang) uses simple language to illuminate the true essence of cultivation.
The first poem teaches that spiritual practice requires letting go of attachments. Like recklessly pursuing gold and silver through thorny bushes—only to deplete one’s Shen (spirit) and Qi (vital energy)—the practitioner must transcend material desires and maintain a serene, indifferent heart.
The second poem emphasizes daily cultivation with a compassionate heart. In the subtle and profound work of refinement, one must understand the harmony of Yin-Yang, much like seeking gold in water or nurturing wood in fire. Fellow seekers ("cloud-companions and mist-friends") should support and verify each other’s progress.
To the Assembly of Practitioners admonishes against trading one’s talents for mere sustenance out of fear of hunger and cold. Desires only breed endless troubles. Only by embracing a pure and simple life, far from worldly temptations, can one refine the Golden Elixir (Jindan) of the Great Dao.
In Remembrance of Immortal Hao praises Hao Datong’s (Immortal Hao) noble demeanor. Like a lone cloud or wild crane, he dwelled in humble quarters—a simple earthen hut—yet diligently cultivated his heart and nature each day, tending the inner fire to forge the elixir (Neidan, internal alchemy). His efforts will culminate in ascension to the Great Canopy Heaven (Daluo Tian), the highest Daoist celestial realm.
For Elder Zhang Shan unveils the profound principle of cultivation: rather than coveting silken luxury, refine yourself amid the mundane. Grasp the mystery of Yin-Yang transformation, transcend the duality of day and night, and let the luminous moon of your true nature (Xingyue) rise to the crimson heavens.
For Aunt Ma depicts the practice of a female Daoist (nüguan): a jade-gourd-bearing immortal gathers herbs amid lotus fragrance, plucking mystic mushrooms beneath the moonlit Western River. Through the Ninefold Reverted Elixir (Jiuzhuan Huandan), the pinnacle of Neidan, she attains longevity, fills the Three Dantian (energy centers) with essence, and soars in transcendent freedom.
For Lord Wang points to the crux of Daoist practice: esoteric theories matter less than daily purification of distracting thoughts. Keep the spiritual terrace (the heart) empty and serene, and the "gold within water" (inner elixir) will naturally crystallize, ready to lift you to the jade peaks of immortality.
Transforming a Bedding embodies Quanzhen’s austere ethos: a quilt stitched from three coarse cloths is spacious enough; its modest length (two by nine feet) serves through all seasons—a testament to the unadorned spirit of cultivation.
For Beggar Yu chronicles the ascetic journey of a Daoist surnamed Yu, who wandered a thousand miles begging for scraps. Embracing this simplicity as true practice, he transcends worldly bonds, refining his nature until the moon of enlightenment (Xingyue) illuminates his heart-field.
For Layman Zhao employs repetitive phrasing to underscore the state of cultivation: a mind clear as still water must be preserved eternally. Within the vast silence (Yaoming), one realizes the radiant clarity of innate nature—a wordplay echoing the Daoist axiom: "Clarity and stillness are the norm of all under heaven."
These poems from the Gradual Enlightenment Collection record Daoist practitioners' cultivation experiences and spiritual states in poetic form. The first poem, "Bright Spirit Manifest," describes the vision during successful Neidan (internal alchemy) practice: when the adept circulates Jing (essence), Qi (vital energy), and Shen (spirit) — the "three vehicles" — into the Dantian (energy center, here called the "precious vase"), a radiant light emerges within the body. This pure Yang illumination dispels Yin negativity (startling ghosts and deities), allowing true essence to naturally coalesce into the elixir (Dan grains) while one's original luminous nature becomes fully revealed.
"Moon Over West Tower" discusses daily cultivation methods: maintain constant physical and mental ease ("leisurely walking, sitting, and resting"), nurture the Dantian's Qi, and harmonize energies from all directions (blending east, west, south, and north). Through the mysterious practice of "extraction and replenishment" (a Neidan technique adjusting breath and intention), one eventually refines the embryonic immortal — the nascent form of internal elixir achievement — now enveloped in five-colored auroras.
"Song of Casting the Ball" emphasizes severing desires and delusions to preserve mental clarity. When the heart-mirror becomes utterly pure, it discerns truth from falsehood. Recognizing the body's inevitable decay, only returning to primordial purity constitutes the true path, as one attentively awaits the immortal attendants (celestial guides in Daoist lore).
"Night Sailing" portrays the transcendent state after perceiving cosmic secrets: genuine mystery transcends Heaven and Earth's constraints. Though outwardly appearing destitute, the practitioner remains unaffected by heat or cold like Patriarch Ma Danyang (Master Ma Feng). Regularly burning the "heart-incense" (symbolizing devout practice), seldom grasping scriptures, they simply anticipate celestial return (the "Silver River" denoting the Milky Way) upon completing their cultivation.
"Chrysanthemums Renewed" depicts sublime cultivation scenery: hidden grottoes contain true wonders where golden-white blossoms (Neidan terms for the elixir's initial formation) and auspicious clouds with sweet dew frequently appear. Alluding to Meng Jia's lost hat and Tao Qian's ideals, it shows adepts progressing daily until meriting immortal robes (the six-ounce garments of celestial beings).
Finally, "Refining Cinnabar Sand" celebrates wandering cultivation's freedom: practicing in cloud-hermitages surpasses temples, discussing mysteries with fellow seekers (cloud-companions and rainbow-friends) while naturally attracting pines and cranes. Willingness to awaken brings sweet realms — mundane affairs left to descendants, but first relinquishing attachments ("reckless indulgence") to dwell in Penglai. The closing "Metamorphic Child" describes post-enlightenment wandering, safeguarding the foundation (the "two-tailed ox" representing Yin-Yang energies), circulating the "jade mercury" (Neidan term for vital essence), where the Golden Elixir forms spontaneously beyond deliberate striving.
This "Immortal by the River" poem conveys the Daoist principle that practitioners must relinquish worldly desires. Though begging for sustenance may appear humble, true cultivators should transcend both shame and honor, glory and disgrace. Devoting oneself to spiritual practice isn't about superficial gestures like feeding hungry eagles or taming fierce tigers, nor should one cling to false appearances. Only by abandoning all mundane toil can the spirit become naturally clear and tranquil, settling the "heart-monkey and mind-horse" (metaphor for restless thoughts). Thus one avoids sinking into the sea of suffering, instead gaining the karmic opportunity to behold Penglai and Yingzhou (Daoist celestial realms).
The latter section mentions a newly ordained practitioner from Longxi near Chang'an who comprehends the great Dao (the Way), seeing through worldly entanglements that can no longer bind him. Cultivators from Tianshui and Pengcheng admire the realm of purity and emptiness, turning toward true awakening while severing attachments to return to original authenticity. There's also Master Duan whose profound understanding appears as foolishness—the wisdom of seeming foolish. Upon hearing these accounts, Shan Tong (Daoist name of Ma Yu) attained the state of complete nirvana, experiencing joy like divine intoxication as he recognized his original face (true suchness nature).
The poem "To the Wine Doctor of Fengxiang" playfully employs drinking anecdotes: Du Kang (legendary inventor of wine) brewing liquor, Zhuo Wenjun (Han dynasty poetess) selling wine by her counter, Bi Zhuo (Jin dynasty drunkard) stealing wine, Liu Ling (Seven Sages of the Bamboo Grove) indulging in drink, Li Bai vomiting wine before the emperor, Luan Ba (Eastern Han alchemist) extinguishing fire with sprayed wine, and Sima Guang (Song dynasty statesman) constantly admonishing abstinence—yet who knows the honorable surname of you, the physician? These allusions subtly suggest spiritual cultivation should resemble wine appreciation: neither excessive indulgence nor rigid abstinence, but harmonious balance.
Vol. 2
Excerpts from Volume II of the Jianwu Ji (Gradual Awakening Collection) by Ma Danyang (one of the founding masters of Quanzhen Daoism) from Mount Kunyu (a sacred Daoist mountain), featuring didactic poems advocating spiritual cultivation. Selected vernacular interpretations follow:
To Elder Chen San:
Living in the world yet untainted by its dust—
like the lotus rooted in water but never wet.
Unmoved by ten thousand temptations,
the key lies in refining the heart and nurturing the inner Shen (spirit).
The Tang layman Pang Yun freed his entire household from worldly ties—
we too should emulate such practitioners.
Long have I abstained from wine, meat, tea, and fruit,
yet I thank you for your gift of pears and dates.
This verse reveals the true meaning of practice:
understanding the simplicity symbolized by pears and dates
surpasses craving wine and tea.
Now I wander freely, sustained by cultivation,
and urge you to leave home for practice without delay.
Having glimpsed the truth between drunkenness and sobriety,
you must see through the cycle of life and death.
Better to join me in refining the Dao (Way) beyond the mundane—
when the ninefold-transmuted Golden Elixir is achieved,
each step will carry you into the realm of immortals.
Self-Admonition:
Sever attachment to children,
relinquish longing for fields and gardens,
abandon gold, silver, wealth—
even wife and sons.
Cast aside all external distractions,
and the heart-mind will settle into clarity.
How pitiful that the world drowns in human sentiment—
such foolishness!
Better to guard the stillness of emptiness,
for Wuwei (non-action) is the truest skill.
To Fellow Practitioners:
Sweep the mind’s dust away often,
meticulously purge worldly desires.
Let no defilement touch your original nature
(Pilu signifies Buddhahood/Dao-nature)—
only constant purity returns you to the source.
Trim the lamp-wick of your heart,
breathe naturally like the Caoxi Zen method.
When Qi flows soft and steady,
this is the unbroken practice of day and night.
To Ma Huaiyu:
When thoughts arise, calm the heart;
when the heart quiets, dissolve the thoughts.
Reach the state of thoughtless silence,
and Shen (spirit) and Qi will harmonize as mother and child
(the interplay of Yin and Yang).
No need to chase Zen techniques,
nor ask for secret methods
(Weilu is a Governing Vessel acupoint).
Pure serenity nurtures true suchness—
joyful ease is the highest practice.
Reflection:
Why yesterday’s joy?
Why today’s sorrow?
Joy came from yearning for the Dao
(Xiyi references Laozi’s "formless, soundless" Dao),
sorrow from lingering attachments to vanity.
To seek the profound truth,
be like a beggar—unkempt, unashamed—
for a cleansed heart builds the ladder to heaven.
Qixi Festival Verse:
The Fire Star (Liuhuo, Antares) ascends;
autumn chills the mortal world.
Magpies bridge the Milky Way,
auspicious clouds adrift.
Where tonight does the Weaving Maid call her Cowherd?
Maidens fret without cause—
they burn incense, begging for skill,
yet who would choose the Daoist way of unadorned simplicity?
(Note: The Qixi Festival celebrates the annual reunion of the celestial lovers Zhinü and Niulang, symbolizing both romantic longing and, in Daoist critique, worldly distraction.)
This Gradual Awakening Collection expresses a cultivator's spiritual journey from confusion to enlightenment through multiple poetic compositions. The first piece employs the lament of a skeleton in a dream as a metaphor, revealing the dangers of indulgence in wine, lust, wealth, and anger—these four destructive pursuits from the past now bring suffering in the cycle of rebirth, regretting the failure to focus on cultivating the Dao and attaining immortality.
The second poem recounts the master-disciple bond between Wang Chongyang and Ma Danyang (founder and disciple of the Quanzhen lineage). They met at Taiyuan's Liang Garden due to karmic ties from past lives, with Ma Danyang earnestly remembering his master's teaching: observe three years of filial piety and five years of dedicated cultivation to guide people toward goodness. Here "Fufeng" refers to Ma Danyang's hometown, while "Wind Immortal" is an honorific title for him.
The third poem expresses determination in cultivation: even with graying hair and disheveled appearance, one should persist in refining the elixir of the three Dantians (upper, middle, and lower energy centers). Maintain inner peace constantly, neither envying Sima Xiangru's fame nor emulating General Fubo Ma Yuan's ambitions—only seeking immortality through the Dao.
The fourth piece reveals essential cultivation methods: reputation must never surpass actual attainment, preserving a state of humble emptiness. Treat true nature as the medicine of longevity and the body as the alchemical furnace. During practice, one must drink the "clarified butter" (symbolizing refined essence) and nurture the inner pearl (Neidan) within the jade tower (realm of cultivation).
The fifth continues elaborating on cultivation attitude: never envy others' earlier awakenings, only worry about lacking simplicity in oneself. Take the body as a hermitage, dwelling peacefully anywhere. Remain unbound by worldly sentiments, maintaining carefree liberation. Here "Shan Tong" is Ma Danyang's self-reference.
Encountering the True Master records meeting Master Wang Chongyang: the master said the key to cultivation lies entirely in the "heart-field" (inner refinement), and Ma Danyang realized the importance of preserving innate nature. From then on, both internal and external cultivation transformed, gradually comprehending the great Dao. Thus he composed poetry to enlighten people, helping them understand the truth behind "spring blossoms and autumn moon" (symbolizing the natural Dao).
Cherishing Yellow Flowers is a rhyming gift for friends: abandon wealth, abstain from wine and lust—only through purity can one guide the dragon and tiger (Yin-Yang energies). With compassionate resolve to save the deluded, poetry becomes mantra-like in its transformative power. Never cling to fleeting pleasures; swiftly cultivate the primordial spirit (Yuanshen). The "jade pot" signifies the Dantian, while the "red dog" metaphorically represents the inner elixir—daily refining within the body until finally soaring on clouds and mist.
The Gradual Awakening Collection presents these exchange poems depicting cultivators who see through worldly illusions to pursue the true Dao.
The poem to Master Jing observes: Though this transcendent gentleman remains wary of wine, lust, wealth, and anger, he occasionally falters. True cultivation requires not others' reminders but constant self-vigilance—only thus can one enter the realm of longevity.
For the Wanderer of Penglai, it describes: When one devotedly guards the Dao (the Way) through the ten bodhisattva stages, celestial mushrooms sprout around them. A thousand days of steadfast practice yields the true treasure (Neidan, internal alchemy). This treasure remains indestructible through myriad kalpas, growing ever more radiant.
Another verse explains: Don't wonder why I've planted bamboo lately—it's not for fleeting greenery but its hardy nature that endures winter. This naturally elevates me beyond the mundane, firming my serene resolve to attain immortal affinity.
The poem to Wanderer Yue praises: Having grasped profound mysteries, this awakened gentleman plays qin melodies that are none other than Penglai's immortal music. These tones penetrate his being, ascending to Hua Mountain's sublime state.
Further verses depict: In transcendent grotto-heavens, golden rain (symbolizing refined Jing, essence) nourishes the ninefold cycled elixir (pinnacle of Neidan), while the restless mind-monkey and willful horse (distractions) settle into clarity. When dual cultivation of nature and life (Xingming Shuangxiu) stabilizes, the embryonic immortal (yang spirit) emerges to soar.
The poem to Three-Topknot Mountain Dong brims with joy: This laughing Daoist dismisses all vexations with mirth. His heart overflows with delight—such genuine laughter embodies the Dao's naturalness.
Admonishing Master Quan, it exposes illusions: Wives and descendants are the first falsehood; gold and jewels the second; glory and rank the third; even this body is the fourth. Seeing through these reveals floating fame as the fifth vanity.
Another warns of three cultivation pitfalls: flee worldly flames, shed fame's entanglements, and avoid social bustle. Like dividing fields in thirds, this yields golden-jade fruits of luminous attainment.
Remembering his master, he writes: Chongyang Zhenren (Wang Chongyang) taught me hundred-day retreats at Difei Mountain (Zhongnan's alternate name). To repay this grace, I vow three years of austere practice—wearing simple spirit-cloth robes, keeping plain fasts.
Of the four masters—Tan Chuduan, Ma Yu, Qiu Chuji, Liu Chuxuan—he notes: Each excels without discrimination. Meeting by karmic chance in Dongmou, they journeyed west to nurture simplicity (reclusive cultivation), perfecting the art of humble living.
To Wanderer Fu, it says: Eschewing wealth, this gentleman cultivates beyond worldly dust. His realized mysterious true nature surely leads to Penglai's immortal isles.
Finally, praising Li the Awakened, he commends: This Aunt Li transcended worldly rites more decisively than any man. Penetrating mystery within mystery, her truth resounds in the Daoist melody Moon Over West River.
These poems from Gradual Awakening Collection express the insights of Daoist practitioners. Here are their meanings in plain terms:
To Recluse Ji (a hermit cultivator):
Seeing through life's transience like passing clouds, one finds joy even in austere living. Constant cultivation of mind and disciplined self-restraint form the fundamental principles for attaining immortality.
For Master Yu Mianqian:
Lamenting a fellow practitioner's resolve to depart, leaving me alone in this tranquil temple. Facing empty walls all day, my mind remains undisturbed like still water.
Another poem:
Content to practice quietly within these walls, untouched by worldly disputes. What seems like foolishness is true freedom—this inner joy embodies the essence of cultivation.
On dreams:
Ordinary dreams are chaotic like galloping horses and leaping apes; after cultivation, they become clear as coiling dragons and crouching tigers. The highest state is dreamless emptiness, where nature and life are cultivated together (xingming shuangxiu), and spirit (shen) and vital energy (qi) coalesce.
To Recluse Jia of Chang'an:
This Jia cultivator understands the illusory nature of the body and resolutely pursues the true Dao. Having attained perfection beyond worldly dust, even the need for wine-assisted practice has dissolved.
To Song Zhirou:
Serene practice dissolves afflictions as vital energy (qi) fills the body. Like condensing precious gemstones—this is the achievement of refining essence (jing) to nourish the brain.
To Quan Zhiwei:
Elder Quan relinquished all attachments; the restless "mind-monkey" and "thought-horse" have settled. In this lucid state, his mind shines clear as the breeze and moon.
To Master Liu:
The Dao's profundity eludes grasping—the deeper one probes, the more mysterious it becomes. Only through complete realization can its truth be seen.
To Brothers Yuangong:
These virtuous brothers have received the Dao's true transmission. Continuing their alchemical practice (neidan), they will surely ascend the immortal ranks.
Advice to Zhongnan Mountain Practitioners:
I admonish fellow cultivators: diligently nurture virtuous connections. Preserve essence (jing), energy (qi), and spirit (shen); refine the inner elixir (neidan)—symbolized by the turtle (yin) and red phoenix (yang)—to ultimately achieve the Golden Elixir (jindan) path.
These poems emphasize quiet cultivation and mind refinement through internal alchemy (neidan) to transcend ordinary existence. The repeated phrases like "joyful, joyful" and "agate, agate" reflect characteristic Daoist mantras that aid focused contemplation.
The wandering practitioner surnamed Xie, unconcerned with worldly fame and fortune, resolutely entered the mysterious gate of Daoist cultivation. He restored the pavilions and towers within the grotto-heaven (a Daoist sacred space for practice), where flowers and trees remained perpetually in bloom—symbolizing the eternal realm he had attained through cultivation.
Moving with the effortless grace of drifting clouds and flowing water, he wandered freely through the eight rivers of Qin Valley (waterways in Guanzhong, Shaanxi), unconstrained like mundane pillars of society. Countless tributaries converged into sacred waters—the very "true water" (a Neidan term referring to primordial essence) sought by Ma Yu (Daoist name Shantong).
In his bamboo-shaded thatched hut, he found joy in simple meals of coarse tea and plain rice. He remembered the teachings of Patriarch Ma Danyang (Daoist name Fengxian): "Tend well the luminous light of your spiritual nature (xingzhu, referring to the original spirit)." To eradicate the roots of illness, one must relinquish worldly attachments, dispel inner sorrows, and allow the true nature to manifest its innate joy—this being the essential method for attaining immortality.
He practiced extinguishing the karmic fires of ignorance (avidya) while maintaining the balance of water and fire within (Neidan terminology for kidney-water and heart-fire), thereby stabilizing the foundation of life. The crucial practice involved generating fire from water (referring to the Neidan process of Kan-Li interaction)—the "true fire" that Ma Yu pursued.
Though Tan the Swift-Footed Messenger (likely a courier) bustled through worldly affairs, he understood contentment. Living in accordance with circumstances while maintaining satisfaction, he remained as steady as the three-legged golden crow (the sun).
The cultivation essentials written for Layman Zhao during the fifth watch: During the first watch, sit alone in inward contemplation, cultivating purple mushrooms (a Neidan metaphor for elixir ingredients) as if plowing clouds and planting mist. At this stage, the qi channels flow unimpeded throughout the body, with kidney-qi (the watery tiger) and heart-fire (the fiery dragon) naturally intermingling.
During the second watch, continue internal focus while visualizing the starry heavens merging with sun and moon. When vital essence fills the body like an unbroken treasure vase, it stirs the battle between dragon and snake (yin and yang energies). At the third watch, repeatedly knock at the mysterious gate (the dantian) to awaken the true self within. Here the jade gate (lower dantian) stabilizes as yin and yang energies harmonize like an innocent maiden and young boy walking hand in hand.
During the fourth watch, guard strictly against distracting thoughts, using wisdom's light to dispel demonic interference. Now the golden essence (yuanjing) condenses without leakage, as a single point of spiritual light takes form. By the fifth watch, enter the realm of silent emptiness—responding to all phenomena without losing one's fundamental truth. Here the spiritual elixir (neidan) becomes perfectly whole, as the embryonic immortal (yang spirit) begins revealing its refined form.
This Daoist cultivation poetry describes the process of transcending worldly realms through the Five Drums (five stages of practice). At the First Drum, the practitioner draws the energies of heaven and earth into the Dantian (energy center), contemplating the Dao of emptiness until the Li (Fire) and Kan (Water) trigrams naturally merge. The mind becomes perfectly clear and still, devoid of even dreams, completely free from demonic disturbances.
The Second Drum ushers one into a wondrous state where yellow sprouts (embryonic form of the Golden Elixir) sprout abundantly, symbolizing the flourishing of life energy. By the Third Drum, the primordial Yang Qi begins circulating, with purple smoke rising from the alchemical cauldron (Dantian). The practitioner feels refreshed in spirit, their inner radiance manifesting.
At the Fourth Drum, visions appear—the infant (pure Yang spirit) riding a phoenix while the maiden (pure Yin energy) holds the reins—signifying the balanced cultivation of nature and life (Xingming Shuangxiu). The Fifth Drum brings resonance with the stars, as the luminous pearl (inner elixir) spontaneously emerges, leading to the supreme state beyond sleep and dreams.
The subsequent verses supplement key cultivation principles: daily practice must focus on breath regulation and nourishing the Shen (spirit), carefully harmonizing the dragon (spirit) and tiger (essence) to gradually refine the Nine-Cycle Reverted Elixir. Criticizing worldly pursuits of fame and profit, the text warns against petty gains that violate the Dao, urging severance of earthly attachments to escape the suffering of rebirth.
The conclusion—a dream of the white brush (symbol of divine communication)—hints that the practitioner has attained a spiritually awakened state.
Ma Yu (Daoist name Shandong) dreamed of visiting the Penglai Immortal Isle, where he encountered the two immortals Zhongli Quan and Lü Dongbin. They were discussing a writing brush in their study - this brush was of pristine simplicity, surpassing even the craftsmanship of ancient brush-making master Meng Tian, and far exceeding the legendary five-colored brush Jiang Yan obtained in his dreams, for true cultivation requires no extravagant external objects. Such a scene brings sudden enlightenment to the mind, perfectly embodying the Daoist supreme pursuit of the "Three Pure Ones" (Sanqing).
At the winter solstice when yang energy first stirs, it's like brushing aside snow to discover newborn yellow sprouts (a Neidan term referring to the nascent primordial qi within). Others marvel at its early appearance, its fragrance resembling divine lingzhi mushrooms. Grinding herbs with jade vessels and brewing them with divine water (the saliva produced during cultivation) naturally dispels the turbid yin energies within. The golden boy (representing pure yang energy within) brings joyous tidings of this peerless treasure - drinking it enables spiritual journeys to Penglai.
In a poem dedicated to Chen Zhiming: Master Chen of Difei Mountain (another name for Zhongnan Mountain), with the white curl between his eyebrows (a mark of cultivation achievement) revealing his extraordinary nature - ordinary men can hardly compare to descendants of Chen Tuan (known as Master Xiyi). Willingly relinquishing worldly attachments, abandoning family ties to seek the Dao, his purified heart naturally nurtures the harmonious qi of "Great Oneness" (the cosmic origin).
A poem for the pagoda-building monk of Xingguo Temple describes: This transcendent monk, with mind clear as deep pools, dwells in a true sanctuary of meditation. Though free of distracting thoughts, he profoundly understands Buddhist truth - his jade-like Buddha-nature manifests perfect harmony everywhere. Only such liberation enables building this golden pagoda symbolizing enlightenment.
Urging Scholar Ning to fulfill his promise of building a hermitage: Fellow practitioners Tan Chuduan, Ma Yu, Qiu Chuji and Liu Chuxuan specially await this retreat for cultivation. A certain gentleman (referring to Scholar Ning) once pledged to build it - we eagerly anticipate good news. Keeping this promise will surely aid your immortal ascent - how could we forget such kindness?
Admonishing fellow cultivators: How laughable that worldly people busily chase fame and profit. Changing countless garments (metaphor for reincarnation), I urge you all to preserve your primordial yang (innate vital essence). Don't squander time - when elixir cultivation succeeds, you'll naturally ascend to Penglai.
A poem on Li Shi'an (Daoist name Jingle): Constant abiding in pure serenity, perpetual maintenance of tranquil body-mind, brings enduring peace. Daily practice requires patience, ultimately achieving perfect yin-yang harmony. True joy lies in responding to circumstances without losing original nature - preserving this indestructible true suchness becomes the priceless treasure.
On Li Gong's Lazy Pavilion: This transcendent dwelling of leisure, where wuwei (non-action) manifests natural Dao. Heart-fire and kidney-water (Neidan terms) merge spontaneously, yin-yang energies condensing into miraculous elixir. When the elixir forms, silver light envelops - consuming it enables cloud-riding flight.
"Clouds Over Witch Mountain" for the Threefold Unity practitioner (Daoist term for unified jing, qi and shen):
Circulating luminous spirit-consciousness,
Forging cavern-heaven blessed land.
On nine-tiered jade terrace auspicious clouds swirl -
This marks cultivation's perfect fulfillment.
Sitting in the Jade Radiance Pavilion, I open an immortal banquet akin to the Qionglin Paradise, savoring its profound meaning. Like a golden tiger roaring and frolicking amid the waves, it stirs the quicksilver (mercury, symbolizing yin energy in alchemy), transforming it into a giant sea turtle (symbolizing the transmutation of yang energy).
The Jade Maiden (symbolizing yin energy) opens the golden hall, while the Golden Lord (symbolizing yang energy) seals the jade gate (referring to key bodily apertures), cultivating the Embryonic Immortal (Neidan term for the refined spirit) in pure clarity. Clouds of qi penetrate Kan and Li (the Water and Fire trigrams of the Bagua, representing the union of yin and yang), greedily observing the spiritual light swirling up and down, even forgetting the written verses. The Divine Pearl (symbol of Neidan attainment) emits nine-colored radiance, riding a crane toward the celestial realm.
The Crimson Child (body of pure yang) consumes the Azure Mother (essence of the Great Yin), while the Red Snake (heart fire) devours the Black Tortoise (kidney water), weaving auspicious light and sacred qi into immortal robes. One must remain vigilant, harmonizing the play of the Charming Maiden (yin) and the Infant (yang), firmly sealing the jade gate (lower Dantian). The bright moon of one’s innate nature illuminates the clear void, stepping upon clouds to seek the Three Mao Perfected Lords (founders of the Maoshan tradition).
Making friends with the rosy clouds frees one from worldly worries; keeping company with the clouds severs mundane entanglements—essence, qi, and spirit (Jing, Qi, Shen) merge in purity. Amid laughter and conversation, the Great Elixir (highest Neidan) is completed. Plucking jade peaches especially for the guests of Penglai Isle, we celebrate the Double Ninth Festival together, feasting in shared delight.
No need to address each other as master and disciple—regard one another as brothers. Cultivating the heart-mind amid the clouds and refining the Jade Capital (upper Dantian), why bother paying respects to the powerful? Strumming the heart’s zither (breath regulation) prolongs life, while drinking the knife-point measure (minute doses of elixir) requires abstaining from worldly wine. On the Jade Terrace, splendid flowers bloom as we wander together through the clouds and mist.
For Brother Hu Liao Xian:
Wielding the azure-steel sword (to sever afflictions),
Holding the white-jade cup (to receive divine nectar),
Empty the heart and fill the belly (core Neidan principle) to nurture the jade essence (inner elixir).
A sudden thunderclap upon the plain
Startles the Three Corpses (malevolent spirits in the body) and Six Thieves (delusions of the senses).
Golden lotuses bloom in the fire (symbol of pure yang),
Naturally revealing the Spirit Child (primordial spirit),
Roaming freely through the Great Void.
The alchemical furnace nurtures the medicine of immortality;
The garden blooms with unfading flowers.
Hungry, I pluck spiritual sprouts (primordial qi) to satisfy;
Thirsty, I drink flowing mists (essence of heaven and earth).
Leisurely admiring the bright moonlight,
Suddenly I see the golden turtle leap—
These two scenes play upon the blue lotus,
Why bother with mortal calendars and years?
Drunk, I recline beneath a crystal canopy;
At leisure, I gaze upon jade-green curtains,
Naturally severing all worldly thoughts.
In the precious cauldron, jade blossoms (elixir flowers) bloom;
Lighting the heart’s incense (true intention) stirs the primal qi,
Summoning qilins and phoenixes in flight,
Dragons coiled and tigers at play with the Divine Pearl (golden elixir).
Once the elixir is complete, one ascends to the immortal capital.
The yellow crane sleeps among pines;
The azure luan perches by the waterside tower.
The white ox (symbolizing true intention) rests by purple ganoderma;
The crimson phoenix (symbolizing the spirit) dwells in the Jade Pool.
Only the Spirit Child (primordial spirit) plays freely—
Beneath the moon that pierces heaven and earth,
The truest skill is revealed.
The first passage depicts the景象 during Neidan (internal alchemy) cultivation: Within the cave lies a separate universe where the dragon and tiger (symbolizing Yin and Yang Qi) clash amidst clouds yet remain invisible. The practitioner harmonizes the Chanyu (feminine energy) with the Ying'er (masculine energy), akin to adorning one's head with jade from Kunlun's summit, until finally the spiritual embryo (Neidan) takes form, enabling one to ride a crane to Penglai, the immortal realm.
The second section describes advanced Neidan practice: Threading the three Dantian (energy centers) with jade strands (genuine Qi) and piercing the nine crucial passes (cultivation obstacles) with golden needles (focused intent) naturally reveals one's true visage. While admiring the jade blossoms (internal visions), one suddenly receives a purple decree from the celestial court delivered by a blue-robed attendant, with one's name already inscribed in the immortal registry for the journey to Penglai.
The third passage portrays cultivation states: The light of one's nature burns like a candle's blue flame, heart-incense (mental focus) transforms into violet smoke, and the lamp of life (vital energy) crystallizes into jade flowers. Shan Tong (Ma Yu's self-reference) attributes his spiritual attainment to teachings from Master Fengxian (Wang Chongyang). After completing the nine-cycled Golden Elixir (highest Neidan achievement), he's summoned by the Jade Emperor to serve as celestial official.
In "Su Mu Zhe" lyrics, Ma Yu (also called Ma Feng'er) experiences sudden enlightenment while shaking an iron horse (ritual instrument) on Chang'an streets: forsaking worldly attachments to follow Master Fengxian's path. The iron horse's chime surpasses prized steeds; renouncing earthly bonds ultimately leads to carefree ascension to azure skies.
Another poem describes an adept's distinctive appearance: wearing eccentric hair buns (nao jiao'er) embodying post-enlightenment wonder. Though mocked as madness, this represents the profound mystery of reversed aging and inverted inner-outer cultivation.
"To Zhang Shandao" warns key cultivation principles: Hearing complaints hastens aging, gazing outward invites illness, reckless speech damages De (virtue). Only nasal breathing (Qi regulation) connects to the Mysterious Gate (celestial portal); its unbroken continuity achieves immortality.
The final poem bids farewell to homeland: Not for livelihood or progeny, nor wealth or glory, but solely to repay parental toil. When offering libations, nine generations of ancestors ascend - proving cultivation surpasses worldly rites.
The Gradual Awakening Collection presents several poems that speak of practitioners relinquishing worldly attachments to pursue the true Dao. The first poem describes how seekers abandon wealth and honors, donning tattered reed mats and even begging for sustenance in their quest for truth. Leaving behind hometown and kin, they wander like drifting clouds or wild cranes. Constant vigilance is needed against the "Six Thieves" (desires arising from eyes, ears, nose, tongue, body, and mind) and the "Three Corpses" (Daoist concept of three malevolent spirits within the body), using the sword of wisdom to sever these attachments and awaken spiritual awareness.
The second poem advises fellow cultivators in Chang'an: while ordinary people struggle in the bitter sea of fame and profit—unaware this depletes their primordial Yang (innate vital essence)—no worldly schemes avail before the wheel of rebirth. Only through Dao cultivation can one transcend the Three Realms. Like Laozi wearing his Daoist headscarf, maintaining pure intention nourishes the spiritual root, leading to longevity and luminous vision.
The third poem reflects on funeral observances. Witnessing mortality should awaken people—none escape the great reckoning. Better to turn back and seek cultivation secrets, releasing family ties and taming the restless "monkey mind." Practicing the Golden Elixir path (Neidan internal alchemy) through the ninefold refinement process (stages of inner alchemical transformation) enables transcendence beyond life and death.
The fourth poem depicts the freedom of monastic cultivation. Freed from domestic constraints, one perceives worldly affairs as transient. Carrying gourds and iron flasks filled with jade nectar (metaphor for internal elixirs), every drink and meal becomes longevity medicine. Following nature's flow, one wanders in carefree ease.
The fifth poem plays with the character "wind" (风) to expound cultivation. "Royal Wind" signifies kingly virtue, while "True Wind" represents Dao's influence—practitioners must move like following favorable winds, spreading benevolent currents (compassion), ultimately realizing karmic fruition within Dao's cosmic breath.
The final two poems address fellow adepts. One recounts instant kinship with Ma Yu (one of the Quanzhen Seven Masters), advising him not to fret over descendants but awaken to innate principles. Another thanks Master Yan for handcrafted noodles, using dough-kneading and cooking as metaphors for mastering the "water and fire in harmony" (Neidan term for yin-yang balance) in spiritual practice.
These passages are selected poems from Ma Yu's (styled Danyangzi) Gradual Awakening Collection, showcasing the lifestyle and cultivation methods of Quanzhen (Complete Perfection) Daoist practitioners during their wandering practice.
The first poem speaks of the cultivator’s equanimity while seeking alms: the begged fragrant rice is divided equally into four portions, regardless of quality or quantity, simply to satisfy hunger. Once fed, they wander freely, bringing ease wherever they go. "Harmful Wind" is Ma Yu’s self-mocking nickname, describing himself riding the "wind-horse" (a metaphor for the restless mind like the wind), casting aside worldly attachments, seeking true refinement (the essence of the Dao) beneath the clear breeze and bright moon. Moving with the wind, he spreads the true teachings everywhere, mastering the power of wind (symbolizing control over the mind), holding a jade cup (representing purity), and roaming heaven and earth with enlightened companions.
The second poem is the cultivator’s self-admonition: no greed, no flattery, no longing for home, no talk of hometown affairs, no entanglement with worldly dust, no false poetry, no reckless preaching. Though his aspirations are lofty, his heart remains humble, nurturing the Golden Elixir (Neidan) amidst a leisurely life of clouds and water. Content without seeking fame, he calls himself "Wind-Supporting Horse" (wind symbolizing the Dao, horse representing the restless mind).
The third poem describes enlightenment upon meeting his master ("Wind Immortal" refers to Wang Chongyang): letting go of self-other distinctions, free from love and hatred, seeing all beings as parents, and recognizing disciples of the Three Teachings (Daoism, Buddhism, Confucianism) as masters. He delights in serene songs and dances, begging by day and lodging in temples by night ("Compassion Fields" refers to Buddhist almshouses). Diligently refining the inner elixir (the three Dantian), after nine cycles of transformation, the path to Penglai, the immortal isle, opens.
The fourth poem depicts alms-seeking life in Nanjing: daily wandering through teahouses, taverns, and alleys, enduring hunger and cold yet living by fate, hoping all will do good—even a single coin given in charity is an act of kindness. Though this mountain rustic (a humble self-reference) may seem ignorant, within him nurtures a spiritual vitality that attests to eternal life.
The last two poems admonish "Brother Li": pointing out his struggle to abandon worldly attachments, his repeated returns to lay life are like shattering Kunshan jade (symbolizing the damaged innate nature), a broken string that cannot be restrung—ultimately leading to failure. Urging him to reform and awaken, extinguishing evil thoughts within, he invites him to cultivate alongside Ma Yu ("Horse-Wind"). Though outwardly docile as a sheep, inwardly fierce as a tiger, he must tame his true nature, wander in pure cultivation, beg for three meals, and extinguish ignorance (afflictions) to reach the other shore (paramita).
These poems are all works of enlightenment by Daoist practitioners, expressing the transcendent state of cultivation that seeks freedom from worldly attachments and the pursuit of unconstrained liberation.
The first poem speaks of letting go of worldly concerns. The practitioner must use an axe to sever attachments to family (the "mountain of affection" symbolizes emotional bonds), resolutely seeking the path to liberation. Wandering in coarse hemp robes, begging for alms may seem destitute, but it is actually a way to dispel ignorance (a Buddhist term referring to delusion), ultimately ascending to the heavens in realization of the Dao.
The second poem describes the tranquil state of cultivation. Maintaining a nature of purity, softness, and forbearance, one lives a simple, unadorned life. Without deliberate action (Wuwei, a core Daoist concept), embracing a state of seeming foolishness (imitating simplicity), unkempt and unwashed yet unbothered—this is how one attains unity with the Dao (the Three Pure Ones, Sanqing, represent the highest Daoist deities).
The third poem depicts a seemingly idle way of cultivation. Unconcerned with grooming, sleeping after meals, and ignoring visitors may appear lazy, but it is actually the practice of Wuwei, awaiting the revelation of celestial timing.
The fourth poem expresses gratitude to a fellow practitioner for gifting shoes. Wearing them allows one to stand tall between heaven and earth, free from shame. Receiving guests without rigid etiquette, one comprehends the profound truths of the Dao (its hidden meaning) in the ordinary, achieving harmony of body and mind (balanced Qi, upper and lower).
The fifth poem is dedicated to fellow practitioners at Huaqing Temple. It portrays the life of cultivation in a blessed grotto-heaven: within walled enclosures, bathed in auspicious light, riding blue oxen and white deer in leisurely freedom. Four years have passed without visiting Mount Hua—surely the companions there must wonder why I cultivate in this place (the "golden lotus" symbolizes the fruits of practice).
The sixth poem advises fellow practitioners to relinquish attachments. Though quiet cultivation is good, if one still clings to family ties, how can the great Dao be realized? Bearing the weight of affection while discussing the Dao, struggling in the sea of suffering, entangled in disputes and fame—how can such a path lead to enlightenment? Without turning back to seek liberation, how can immortality be attained?
The final poem describes the life of secluded cultivation. In winter, no stove is needed—one guards the primordial Yang Qi (a key concept in Daoist inner alchemy). In summer, no clear spring is drunk—only the jade nectar of immortality. No candles are lit—the mind's clarity provides light. No incense is burned—the heart's fragrance serves as offering. Three years of barefoot walking, three years enduring hunger and cold—all are necessary trials on the path of cultivation.
Plain Interpretation of Gradual Enlightenment Collection:
Wang Chongyang (Daoist name Chongyangzi) wrote in his hermitage on Mount Zhongnan: I aspire to reach the azure heavens, dwelling long in seclusion to cultivate the Dao. There's no need to repay worldly favors—this "Harmful Wind" (Wang's self-mocking nickname) only seeks liberation from the mundane.
At Willow Crossing, I recall the heroic spirit of my westward journey from Ninghai in Shandong. I cherish most the beauty of Plum Creek's willow-lined ferry, often strolling bamboo paths and apricot-blossom ridges. The Qin River valley spreads like embroidered silk perfect for spring slumber, while the Wei River shimmers like a ribbon reflecting endless sunlight. These boundless wonders defy full description, making one wish to paint them as celestial paradises.
On tea poetry: Lu Tong (Tang Dynasty tea sage) achieved immortality after seven cups—these snow-sprout tea leaves amaze even seasoned adepts. Though top-grade "Spearpoint" tea (premium variety), true flavor requires perfect fire and water. Brew golden pistils in hare-fur cups, watching crab-eye bubbles cascade like jade springs. Yesterday's single cup dispelled lingering drunkenness—my spirit stays refreshed, sleepless till now.
Of reclusive life: Casual visitors matter not, only their gossip harms. True joy lies in serene non-contention; profound truth needs no verbose debate. Discussing rights and wrongs drains vital essence (Jing), mentioning fame makes virtue (De) fade. Better maintain crystal clarity—natural cool freedom follows.
Advising Official Han Three: A man's cultivation values steadfast words—broken promises should shame. Though Han Three and Ma Two grew distant, Ma still remembers Han. Supporting family seems sweet but bitter; Dao practice seems bitter yet sweet. Penetrate this bitter-sweet truth to transcend dust and dwell in cloud-hermitages.
Receiving home letters: Hastily opening family mail while pasting windows against wind. My Dao-heart now differs—unable to follow your wishes. Cultivation merits remain incomplete; still I wander to Supreme Unity Palace (Taiyi Gong). Tell children and grandchildren: future letters may be tossed by walls.
Another verse: Lighting heart-incense, singing "Wandering Fragrance," tasting true carefree joy. No more fetters of profit on brows, no worldly chains on my body. Once a householder bound by duties, now a renunciant Dao cultivator. Reaching this realm of freedom—what if others call me mad?
To fellow adepts: Cultivation works on the heart—tame wild-horse thoughts and unruly-ape mind. Firmly grasp your nature to manifest five-colored auspicious light; a moment's slackness risks falling into three wretched realms. Grant freedom and the spirit runs wild; brief negligence undoes past efforts. Eternal clarity and awareness bring natural transcendence beyond phenomena.
The Gradual Awakening Collection presents several poems elucidating how Daoist practitioners can transcend worldly desires and pursue spiritual liberation.
The first poem states that if a cultivator remains attached to pleasures like fine wine, sensual beauty, and material wealth, their mind will never attain purity. Those who truly comprehend the "profound mystery" (referring to the essence of the Dao) will recognize these attachments as illusory.
The second poem points out that even if one outwardly abstains from wealth, lust, and alcohol, harboring malicious thoughts still disqualifies them as genuine practitioners. True cultivation requires purifying the mind, remaining undisturbed by external temptations, and returning to the original state of the heart. When the "self-attachment" (ego-consciousness) arises, endless afflictions follow; only when worldly desires are extinguished can one experience true joy. To learn the ways of immortals, one must master forbearance and prevent desires from consuming their "true suchness" (intrinsic nature).
In a poem addressed to his hometown folk, the author advises Daoist seekers to sever attachments to home as decisively as cutting through iron nails, riding white clouds to visit celestial beings. The worldly home is not the true destination—only the transcendent realm of immortals can be the abode of the spirit. With carefree wandering comes freedom from ties; why dwell on the past?
Another critique follows: many who study the Dao appear diligent but lack steadfast resolve. If the "smoke and fire" (worldly desires) remain unextinguished, resentment arises; if mundane ties persist, greed takes root. To eliminate the "three karmas" (evil deeds of body, speech, and mind), one must sever desires at their source. Only by maintaining purity, forbearance, and wuwei (non-action) can one ascend to the ranks of immortals.
Ma Yu (one of the patriarchs of the Quanzhen tradition) reflects on his past ensnarement in fame and fortune, adrift in the sea of suffering. Only after meeting Fengxian (Wang Chongyang) did he break free from these shackles. Now, he prefers the life of idle clouds and wild cranes to being bound again.
He advises against obsessing over past karmic connections—willingness to turn back is enough to form virtuous ties. Seeing through the illusory nature of fleeting life brings one closer to the great Dao. Those without sincere aspiration lack the affinity, while earnest seekers naturally encounter immortal destiny. Since ancient times, immortals have always cultivated beyond worldly life—true opportunities are rare amid mundane existence.
Finally, the text states that Fengxian (Wang Chongyang) transmitted the authentic lineage, with disciples like Qiu Chuji and Ma Yu continuing its propagation. It warns against chasing "dreams within dreams" (deluded attachments) and encourages learning to "seek the wind within the wind" (metaphor for seeking the Dao within the Dao). To understand the true meaning of "wind," one must distance themselves from worldly dust and nurture their inner nature.
In a poem dedicated to Li Gong of Doumen, he remarks that there is no need to search afar for enlightened teachers—everyone inherently possesses the immortal nature. The pure and profound truth is subtle beyond measure; those who awaken to it find their true master within. If love and hatred remain unresolved, one’s original nature remains obscured.
This collection of Daoist cultivation poetry, Gradual Awakening Anthology, vividly portrays the spiritual journey of practitioners who see through worldly illusions to pursue transcendence. The opening poem directly addresses the crux of practice: when seeking a master while still clinging to "self-attachment," the essential heart-mind connection between teacher and disciple remains blocked, ultimately hindering attainment. Like Liujiang Village near Zhongnan Mountain (a sacred Daoist site) - though renamed "Immortal Meeting Hamlet" to attract seekers - true cultivation requires relinquishing worldly ties.
The poem dedicated to the carefree "Breeze Wanderer" depicts cultivation's progressive stages: diligent external practice and purifying mental defilements gradually sever mundane attachments, allowing profound mysteries to unfold. When the "Great Medicine" (Neidan/internal elixir) matures within, divine radiance illuminates the entire body, enabling ascension to Penglai's immortal isles aboard a celestial raft. Subsequent verses reference "Three Lights" (sun/moon/stars), "Six Perfections" (cultivation stages), and "Nine Cycles" (golden elixir refinement) - all Neidan terminology describing how practitioners circulate Qi through cosmic cycles to ultimately forge the "Embryonic Immortal" (yang-spirit) beyond life and death.
Advising Master Yan, another poem distills essential practice: sever thoughts of right/wrong and self/other, abstain from wine/desire/wealth/Qi disturbances to escape rebirth cycles. When auspicious light coalesces like jeweled blossoms and nectar crystallizes into pearls, celestial encounters occur naturally. Another verse emphasizes heart-mind cultivation: when fame and success arise, rein in the heart like taming "monkey-horses" (restless thoughts), harmonizing dragon-tiger (water-fire/yang-yin) intercourse to complete the ninefold golden elixir.
The Householder's Suffering series uses stark contrasts to reveal worldly life's futility: maintaining households resembles dwelling in fire pits, buried beneath dusty toil, while cultivators abide beyond phenomena, perceiving "gold within water" (primordial Qi) in pristine clarity. Busy worldlings chase illusions yet cannot escape impermanence, while seemingly idle practitioners guard the "True Constant" (Dao's essence). Most striking is the metaphor of bees: laboriously gathering honey only to weave webs trapping themselves, while cultivators move like untrammeled wind - saliva transforming into jade nectar (golden fluid) to nourish "yellow sprouts" (Dantian's nascent yang), untainted by worldly dust.
The Gradual Awakening Collection reveals the true essence of spiritual cultivation through contrasting worldly life with the path of Daoist practice. It first describes the myriad sufferings of mundane existence: people exhaust themselves accumulating wealth yet remain insatiably greedy; officials climb the ranks only to crave higher positions, yet find themselves helpless in times of crisis. They scheme daily to support their families, yet mortal flesh inevitably meets death. Like a perilous chess game fraught with dangers, they ultimately cannot escape judgment in the underworld.
The path of cultivation, however, is entirely different: genuine Daoist practitioners do not crave material comforts, conceal their brilliance, or chase empty fame. Through wuwei (non-action, the state of aligning with nature), they transcend the shackles of life and death. They widely foster virtuous connections, persisting in practice until their merits reach perfection, ultimately attaining the freedom of immortals. Upon reaching certain stages of cultivation, the divine pearl (a Neidan term referring to refined essence) within their bodies radiates light, manifesting as a majestic spiritual child (symbolizing the appearance of the primordial spirit). The "charming maiden and infant" (Neidan terminology for yin and yang energies) harness the "dragon and tiger" (symbolizing the harmonization of water and fire), culminating in a complete metamorphosis into transcendent beings like phoenixes and qilins.
The author particularly emphasizes: cultivation itself is not difficult—the true challenge lies in severing worldly attachments. The initial separation from mundane ties is the most arduous, akin to breaking deeply ingrained habits. Yet once the mind awakens to its true nature, one realizes that sustaining a household is the real hardship, while learning the immortal path proves surprisingly simple. The key lies in comprehending the subtle celestial mechanisms while seeing through the illusory nature of worldly bonds. By maintaining mental clarity, one naturally accesses profound mystical states, attaining the immortal path without needing verbal instruction.
The final section, Untying the Jade Pendant, records the insights of Ma Yu (Daoist name Shantong): struck by his master’s guidance, he experienced sudden awakening, recognized past errors, and began rectifying his foundational practice. Through cultivation, he achieved the "dragon-tiger convergence" (a Neidan term for yin-yang harmonization) and wielded the "sword of wisdom" to cut through delusions. After refining the divine elixir, he reverently offered it to his teacher. He distilled essential principles: restrain aggressive energy and constantly reflect inward; preserve the "true constant nature" (original authentic state) without forced meditation; remain humble and non-contentious; balance the "dragon and tiger" within the kan-li (water-fire trigrams of the Bagua); ultimately arriving at a state beyond love and hatred, where self and objects are forgotten—naturally avoiding calamity and attaining supreme liberation.
This collection of poems from Gradual Awakening Anthology (Jianwu Ji) reveals the spiritual state of Daoist practitioners pursuing transcendence from worldly dust and cultivating internal alchemy (Neidan). The first poem, "Plum Blossom Prelude" dedicated to Master Bai, depicts the practitioner (named Transcending-Dust Master) breaking free from the shackles of life and death, wandering freely like drifting clouds and flowing water. During cultivation, genuine compassion (zhenci) arises spontaneously—this compassion secretly nourishes the practice, often leading to self-realization. The phrase "flood dragon returns to tiger and rhinoceros" employs Neidan terminology, symbolizing the harmonization of yin and yang qi within the body. "The lamp's light in water shines long" metaphorically represents the clarity of mind during meditation, while "forming spiritual mushrooms" signifies the successful refinement of internal elixir. With this achievement, one may journey to Penglai and Yingzhou (Daoist celestial realms) to devoutly present the fruits of practice to one's master.
In the poem dedicated to fellow practitioners, "ziwu" refers to the pivotal hours of midnight and noon, while "coiling dragon and crouching tiger" symbolizes the circulation of essence (Jing) and qi. The verse cautions practitioners to guard their spiritual focus ("let not the horse-monkey steal glances") and awaken the spiritual turtle (kidney essence) through breath regulation (nasal inhalation and exhalation). The "enchanting maiden and tender infant" represent the convergence of yin and yang qi within, preparing for ascension to Penglai. Only through tempering like rivers and lakes can the golden elixir (Jindan) be perfected, revealing one's inherently transcendent nature.
The poem for Elder Li critiques worldly obsession with illusions and mundane attachments, comparing ordinary life to an iron man melting in fiery courts. It urges sudden awakening to life-and-death impermanence, leaping beyond worldly cages to seek the mysterious. "Tiger of Kan and dragon of Li"—standard Neidan terms—denote the alchemical state where water and fire achieve perfect balance.
"Remembering the King's Grandson" and poems dedicated to Chongyang Zhenren describe advanced cultivation states: only with purified heart and tranquil mind can one enter the mysterious gate (Daoist path), silently nurturing the root. Sudden enlightenment reveals ineffable truth—when intrinsic nature sheds obscurity, that single spark of spiritual light endures through myriad kalpas. Another verse depicts effortless movement through Chang'an (symbolizing the mundane world), where golden lotuses (emblematic of purity) bloom amidst flames. Drinking the measure of knife-guī (alchemical medicine) surpasses turbid wine—a few cups suffice to cleanse worldly attachments.
"Hemp Robe and Paper Garment" portrays the ascetic life: wearing coarse hemp and paper coats through winter, indifferent to warmed chambers and red braziers (rejecting sensory indulgence). By steadfastly recognizing truth, with qi and spirit (Shen) at peace, one refines the non-action (Wuwei) ninefold-transmuted elixir—the supreme Neidan accomplishment.
"The Simpleton Guo Lang," dedicated to Chongyang Zhenren's nephew Wang Zhouchen, warns against clinging to fame, wealth, and family to avoid samsaric suffering. Purity and naturalness alone illuminate the Dao; when spirit and qi unite, success grants audience with the Jade Emperor before cloud-borne ascension.
"Golden Petals and Leaves" for Xu Anshen teaches that mental clarity requires untying emotional knots. Freed from domestic ties, relinquishing wife, children, and property—better to embrace seeming foolishness than parade cleverness. Harmonizing dragon and tiger (yin-yang) demands patience; thus one spontaneously apprehends immortal secrets, for original true nature remains indestructible.
Though "Blue Jade Table" remains unexplored, its title likely evokes the pure altar of practice, emblematic of noble spiritual aspiration. Throughout these works, Neidan philosophy permeates—emphasizing the cultivation path of transcending dust, balancing yin-yang, and realizing innate nature.
These poems from The Gradual Awakening Collection employ vernacular language to reveal the life attitudes and cultivation states of Quanzhen (Complete Perfection) Daoist practitioners. The first poem, addressed to Master Ran He, states: Ordinary people are like those trapped in an endless burning house (a metaphor for worldly afflictions), muddled and unawakened, spending their days competing for wealth, quarreling, and clinging to wives and children—all of it ultimately futile labor. Far better to swiftly seek the profound Dao, stabilize the spiritual root (one’s innate nature), and let the true fire (the Yang energy of Neidan/internal alchemy) refine body and mind, returning to the clear and pure origin. Only then can one forge the Golden Elixir (Jindan) as the great medicine and resonate with the celestial mechanism.
The subsequent poems, addressed to fellow practitioners, use the lively verse form of "Playful Tune." For instance, the poem for Masters Zhang and Ma depicts a cultivation scene: Under moonlight, the silver toad (a metaphor for lunar essence/Yin Jing) leaps; at midnight, the golden rooster (a metaphor for solar essence/Yang Qi) crows. The waters of Kan and the fire of Li (the trigrams representing water and fire in the Bagua/Eight Trigrams) merge harmoniously. Suddenly, they encounter the "Charming Maiden and Infant Boy" (Neidan terms for Yin and Yang energies) jointly guarding the alchemical furnace. In the mountains, radiant clouds glow as the divine pearl (the inner elixir) shines brilliantly, wreathed in auspicious mists—this is the Celestial Youth dispatched by the Three Pure Ones (Sanqing) to deliver the Dao’s decree.
The poem for the four perfected ones—Qiu, Liu, Tan, and Ma—describes how they were fortunate to receive Wang Chongyang’s (the Wind Immortal) awakening, leaving Shandong to wander the Qin region, living in carefree poverty while expounding the Quanzhen tradition. Each is characterized distinctly: Qiu Chuji (Immortal Qiu) retreats to Pan Creek to contemplate the profound mysteries; Liu Chuxuan (Immortal Liu) severs worldly ties on Mount Zhongnan; Tan Chuduan (Immortal Tan) cultivates great stillness, content in poverty; while Ma Yu (the Three-Topknot Mountain Hermit) embodies untrammeled freedom.
The poem for Xu Xuanzhi praises his innate immortal bones—how he renounced household ties to pursue the supreme Dao, mastering the secrets of refining the Golden Elixir (with "yellow sprouts" symbolizing the nascent elixir), henceforth taking the Daoist name "Azure Radiance." The poem for the Misty Radiance Recluse portrays this banished immortal seeing through worldly glory, donning Daoist robes to wander freely, taming the "monkey of the mind and horse of the will" (metaphors for restless thoughts), his nature as spotless as jade.
The final verses summarize each perfected one’s cultivation traits: Tan Chuduan fully awakens to the Dao of Eternal Truth (Changzhen), refining mind and nature; Ma Yu roams free like a mad sage; Liu Chuxuan comprehends the wondrous methods of longevity; Qiu Chuji attains the "Everlasting Spring, Nightless Realm" (a metaphor for Neidan achievement); while Hao Datong (Chuduan) directly points to the great Dao, bearing the name "Eternal Truth" (Changzhen), living in untroubled bliss.
This passage is a selection from Gradual Awakening Collection by Ma Yu (styled Danyangzi), patriarch of the Quanzhen (Complete Perfection) tradition. Written in classical poetic form, it documents his spiritual realizations on cultivation.
The first poem speaks of practicing with the single-minded focus of drawing water before a cliff. Abiding in mystery (referring to Daoist practice) leads to penetrating the wondrous Dao. To truly comprehend the essence of eternal life requires perseverance like Qiu Chuji (the Eternal Spring Master). Calling himself "Mountain Simpleton," Ma reflects on how his obsession with poetry hindered cultivation, warning that only by severing desires can one attain the purple celestial realms (higher spiritual states).
The second poem repents how poetic composition became an obstacle. Realizing this brought ice-treading vigilance. He resolves to abandon brush and ink (symbolizing worldly talents) to focus on nurturing Jing (essence), Qi (vital energy), and Shen (spirit). Ma advocates Wuwei (non-action) practice, discovering true nature precisely in apparent indolence.
Farewell to Nanjing uses character dissection to express renunciation: though the golden mansion's (wealthy life) gate stands open, the cultivator turns no more. Carrying the Golden Elixir (Neidan) with the infant (original spirit), he journeys to Penglai paradise to pay homage to ancestral master Lü Dongbin.
Passing Jingyuan Town records his mindset during bandit encounter: though threatened by weapons, Xia Gong's sword-like eloquence delivered him. Offering incense in gratitude demonstrates how adepts clearly distinguish kindness and grievance.
For Chongyang Master's Nephew emphasizes how severed worldly ties illuminate the mind. Inner contemplation (neimao) requires timely adjustment. Only by penetrating the mundane-sage dichotomy can one return to primordial clarity, refining purity through Dantian's firing process.
For Elder Cai depicts the liberated state: free as clouds over water, metal-wood (yin-yang) merging seamlessly. Through recognizing the maiden and infant (inner yin-yang), one realizes the Dao, forging the Golden Elixir at Caoxi (Chan Buddhist metaphor for Dantian).
For Wu Zhigang elucidates heart-mind essentials: transform impatience into calmness where hatred-love fade naturally. At dragon-tiger communion (yin-yang harmony), the Golden Elixir coalesces, allowing the jade lad (original spirit) to ascend.
Instructing Li Zhongda uses angling as conversion metaphor: like luring whales with fragrant bait (difficult conversions), patience prevails. When conditions ripen, glue-lacquer-like Dao bonds form, ultimately realizing the golden immortal fruit.
This section from the Gradual Awakening Collection employs the imagery of the "golden rooster heralding dawn" to repeatedly urge people toward spiritual awakening. The first poem laments how people exhaust themselves chasing wealth and sensual pleasures while neglecting the fundamental cultivation of their nature and life (性命双修), thereby accumulating negative karma and depleting their virtue (德). When impermanence (death) arrives and the underworld officers drag them to Fengdu (the underworld), it will be too late. The wise, however, should heed the golden rooster's call—awakening to abandon worldly illusions and focus on spiritual practice.
The second poem describes the torment of dwelling in the "burning house" of worldly life, aging from fretting over children while others worry on your behalf. Better to awaken early and seek the profound Dao, refining the Golden Elixir (金丹) to transcend suffering. True cultivation isn’t about superficial displays but maintaining the inner true suchness (the unchanging essence in Buddhist and Daoist thought), allowing the "heart’s incense" (sincere devotion) to resonate with heaven and earth.
The third poem directly points out that everyone inherently possesses an immortal nature, yet they drown in domestic trivialities. One must escape the bitter sea of delusion, preserving their luminous spirit (神) from worldly contamination. Through inner alchemy (内丹), achieving the "dragon-tiger union" (a Neidan term for harmonizing yin and yang) and forming the divine elixir can reverse aging.
The closing poems use "the fading light of dusk" as a metaphor for life’s brevity, urging early cultivation. Just as fishing requires fragrant bait, poetry serves as a skillful means to guide seekers. Once the true principle is grasped, one can awaken like the golden rooster’s cry, leaping free from the sea of rebirth. The repeated refrain, "emerging from my golden rooster’s call," underscores the critical moment of awakening in spiritual practice.
In these lyrics, Ma Yu (Daoist name Danyangzi) expresses his insights on spiritual cultivation, urging people to awaken early. He emphasizes the need for genuine sincerity in Dao practice, warning against hesitation and delay that may invite ridicule. He advises people to let go of worldly attachments with the same ease as a crane leaving an ornate pillar (a traditional symbol of wealth and status). When gazing into the distance from high places, he constantly reminds fellow practitioners to heed the revelatory moment like the "golden rooster heralding dawn."
Wang Chongyang (Daoist name Sanji Shantong) writes of leaving his hometown to cultivate the Dao, untroubled by worldly affairs yet deeply concerned about humanity's obsession with material desires that obscure the fundamental truths of xing (inner nature) and ming (vital life). Willingly enduring humiliation, he patiently guides others like an angler, repeatedly urging destined individuals to awaken to the truth of the "golden rooster's call."
Another lyric recounts how when he first entered the Daoist path, he immediately advised fellow practitioners to sever household ties (worldly attachments), for prolonged delay would only entangle them in mundane affairs. By returning to Daoist cultivation—playing the qin under moonlight, contemplating profound mysteries (cosmic truths)—one attains genuine carefree liberation.
"Divine Clarity and Elegance" depicts advanced cultivation states: during intense practice, precious neidan (internal elixir) naturally forms within. The Jade Tiger (lung spirit) and Golden Dragon (liver spirit) guard the three dantian (upper, middle, and lower energy centers). Upon achieving the ninefold refined golden elixir, a celestial youth brings heavenly appointment—donning six-zhu robes (immortals' weightless garments) to ride cranes toward Penglai paradise.
"Returning After Dao Accomplishment" describes perfected cultivation: adepts enjoy serene wuwei (non-action) amidst pine shadows (referencing Laozi's "formless and soundless" states), free from vulgar expressions. Within, yin and yang energies (the Dark Maiden representing yin, the Infant representing yang) harmonize with dragon-tiger (water-fire) forces. Completing three thousand virtuous deeds enables ascension to the Jasper Pool (Queen Mother's abode), manifesting miraculous countenance.
"Welcoming Immortal Guests" uses celestial imagery: the Golden Crow (sun) and Jade Rabbit (moon) circulate ceaselessly along the zi-wu meridian (north-south energy channel), while dragon-tiger (spirit and vital energy) pursue each other. The Dark Maiden sings as the Infant dances—within the Jade Hall (dantian), golden spirit reigns supreme, roaming freely with rosy clouds to open Quanzhen's Dao-gate.
Finally, it mentions Ma Yu's destined encounter with his master Wang Chongyang (styled Fengxian) at Kunyu Mountain—a karmic bond from past lives. Their connection formed in the Qin region's Zhongnan Mountains (alternatively called Difei Mountain), where cultivation achieved the perfect balance of Li trigram (fire) clarity and Kan trigram (water) tranquility in yin-yang harmony.
The fire within water (referring to the true yang energy of the kidneys) merges with the infant (original spirit, Yuanshen) and the maiden (original essence, Yuanjing), lying dormant like a sleeping tiger or hidden dragon. When the spirit condenses and the Qi converges, the radiance of spiritual illumination manifests. Riding celestial chariots through auspicious mists, one journeys to pay homage to the Celestial Worthy of Primordial Beginning (Yuanshi Tianzun) and ascends the gates of immortality.
Ah, Patriarch Chongyang (Wang Chongyang)! You who profoundly understood the mysterious workings of heaven cultivated golden lotuses and jade blossoms (symbolizing alchemical attainment) in purity—how few truly comprehend this state? You guided sentient beings, gradually returning them to the great Dao. Brother Fufeng (Ma Yu’s Daoist name) was neither naturally enlightened nor dull-witted, yet he came to discern truth from illusion. In deep contemplation, his mind opened to vast clarity—none could match the exemplary standard of his master.
Difficult, truly difficult! Renouncing worldly life is hard; severing attachments and abandoning mundane ties is harder still; maintaining unwavering Wuwei (non-action) and purity is the most challenging of all. Yet compared to death, what are these struggles?
To speak of the profound and mysterious Dao requires a willing listener. If a disciple comes seeking guidance, one should open the path of discourse and aid their progress. Yet whether they persist in cultivation—this I cannot guarantee.
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